Symphony

Experimental writing.

my heart beats 

your name 

~

in symphony

 

your marble gaze 

falls 'pon me 

as the current in me 

flows vibrantly 

I was but an 

undead flower 

which craved 

your touch; 

now alive, more than ever, 

the breath of you 

soothing ... gently 

around my slightly shaking wrists... 

and even if I stop --- 

my heart beats

your name 

~ 

in symphony

Reviews

[Damien Ridge]

Beautiful poem. "I was but an undead flower... Now alive, more than ever..." Living but barely, now awakened by that someone. Very good! Thanks for sharing.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for appreciating 😊

[wordman]

love is like an orchestra ,

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That's a nice comparison. Thank you 😊

[wordman]

you`re welcome