Symphony

Experimental writing.

my heart beats 

your name 

~

in symphony

 

your marble gaze 

falls 'pon me 

as the current in me 

flows vibrantly 

I was but an 

undead flower 

which craved 

your touch; 

now alive, more than ever, 

the breath of you 

soothing ... gently 

around my slightly shaking wrists... 

and even if I stop --- 

my heart beats

your name 

~ 

in symphony

Reviews

[Rachel]

I love the idea of a heart beating someone's name, because that was a really pretty way to describe love! This was a really nice romantic poem, and it was easy to read and enjoy.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I like that idea too ;)
Thank you for appreciating this piece as well. Glad you enjoyed 😊

[Poetic Beauty]

Hearts beating a specific symphony is a brilliant idea. Love the music this poem played.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you. I'm glad you like it 😊

[Poetic Beauty]

You are quite welcome

[Ty]

Direct and quick. Refined words culminating a flow. A symphony.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Ty. Appreciate your words here 😊

[Caroline]

Beautiful poem . Keep it up

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you. I'm glad you like it :)

[Mr.Writer]

Such a dreamy, sensational poem that gives amazing vibes Yumna!
I loved it, I really did!
Well done, keep it up :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I'm glad it gave you the vibes, Shaan. Thank you for appreciating as always :)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Great earnest poetic write; an extended romantic composition of one's heart's desire! Simple lovely …….

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Phill. I'm glad you like it :)

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Great lyrical style. Love the delicacy, musicality, and flow of this. Love is a "Symphony"- yes! Beautiful.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for your words here, Annette. I appreciate it 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

So beautiful dear friend. perfect use of words and thoughts. When someone name is a symphony. We are in love. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for your words here, Coyote. Always appreciate it 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear friend.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Two can make beautiful music..Together...

Soft..Tender ... Beautiful..


Jazzy

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for your words here. I appreciate it 😊

[J. J. Nightingale]

You are welcome...............J.J.