Sing Me To Sleep

Experimental. Written hastily

Sing me to sleep 

a lullaby 

transport me 

to heaven

dreams of 

neverland

unapproachable

still ~ what's left 

of memories 

untouched; 

let our love 

never falter

like unwatered 

lilies; withered

my eyelids 

droop

Sing me to sleep

a lullaby

Author's Note

Might be editing this... not sure about the structure..

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

i like the structure ... punctuates each little couplet ...your poem sets me to dreaming easy ...drifting off to that lullaby ... sighhhhhhhh i miss them from me Ma and Da ... they both had their favorites ... especially me Da .. i hear his deep voice still :( i like this one a lot Dr.
E.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This is such a nice thought! I'm glad it gave you that feeling. Thank you so much for appreciating, E 😊

[Einstein Noodle]

i use to sing "the goodnight song" to my children and they were all quite tolerant...except for the younger daughter ..she would look out from the covers and say .."not the goodnight song Dad ..don't sing the good night song!!!!" :) she is still a little stink pot ..

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Lovely poem. "Dreams of neverland"... Sing me a lullaby, gentle, lyrical...sing me a song of love..."my eyelids droop"...sooooo peaceful. Beautiful.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Annette. I'm glad you found it peaceful. I appreciate your words here :)

[Surya]

Yeah structure is good, it conveyed what you wanted to say...
It's so soothing, I might need a lullaby too now, hahaha...I enjoyed it...:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahah thank you, Surya! Glad you like it :)

[Najam Us Saher]

So soothing to read....It feels like a poetic good night message..😀

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Yeah probably because I'm suffering from lack of sleep lol
Thank you for your nice words here and for liking :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You are most welcome ☺

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice to be sung to sleep with a sweet lullaby. Nice flow of thoughts left the reader with a hopeful feeling and place. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Coyote. Appreciate your kind words here :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.