A Long Lost Dream

Experimental. Totally random.

His skin ...​ a landscape,​

upon which I doodled

​shapes, memories, fantasies

 

drawings on an empty canvas. ​

 

​My fingers ... splayed; 

vibrant colours ... brushes of ecstasy

refreshed, reawakened, revived​

​

 ~ A long lost dream ~ 

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

Short but sensuous and rich in meaning. Excellent.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Ken. Truly appreciate your words here :)

[Priyanshi]

So short and simple poem, I loved it, friend...a beautiful dream full of memories, fantasies...
"My fingers ... splayed;
vibrant colours ... brushes of ecstasy..."......loved these lines, Yumna.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Priyanshi. Glad you like it 😊

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[Angelheart1]

A beautiful dream you have painted upon his skin and have shared with us through this writing. A deeply meaningful piece stated with few words. Beautifully writ YumnaKay. Angelheart

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Angelheart. I appreciate your words here 😊

[Angelheart1]

My pleasure.

[Mr.Writer]

Very drastic and lovely piece Yumna! Quite refreshing and engaging as well! :)
Keep it up

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Shaan. Glad you liked it 😊

[apennylate]

Almost wondering where you got "refreshed" from... Seems like a purposeful switch-up... An interesting thought... Finger-painting on skin... Do we use fire or paint...The three R's make a strong, boldly linear statement... Dreamily penned...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hmm nothing in my writing is really ever purposeful, Silente 😛 I just went along the words and this...came out lol..
Thank you for your appreciation. Truly means a lot 😊

[apennylate]

Well then... Keep at it, cause I enjoy this style... Although I still sometimes question rhyme meter... Of course...!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Yeah I knew someone would gonna say that 😛 I've actually neglected that meter thing for days now lol but I'll get to it 😉😊 thanks for the reminder haha 😛

[apennylate]

Haha, oh boy... Well... Better clean that up, or else... Or else...

[emmajoy]

Perhaps dream come true? Such beautifully laid words, Yumna. This new styel really lies 'longside your thoughts.

There's something about blank canvasses that call for visuals!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

And some say that we see in dreams what we want to see in reality...so maybe they do come true...read moreAnd some say that we see in dreams what we want to see in reality...so maybe they do come true...
Thank you for your generous words and appreciating, Emma. Means a lot 😊

[emmajoy]

Perhaps, even more so, we need gently reach and spar for those dreams to come true.. (note, i didn't say fight..)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hmm I believe fate does have a hand in it....

[emmajoy]

Everything has a hand in it... that's why everything exists!

[Kesha]

I really like this new style that you have adopted.. quite jealous really. A wonderful piece! Nicely penned I loved it :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahah Kesha 😛 this new style is kinda a short cut really lol it helps me write off mere words that crop up my mind on the way back home 😛😂
Glad you like it. Thank you for appreciating 😊

[Kesha]

Haha well that's even cooler :P and you're welcome :)

[The earth (Titan maphah..]

Man this is ice... I like this...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, glad you like it :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oooo relate to this right now---interactions with an ex----positive...maybe some dreams just go away for awhile....but return.
beautiful expression here.

j.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

They do, sometimes... Thank you, Jacob, for your kind words here. Truly appreciate it :)