An Unrequited Love

Experimenting yet again, more of a challenge by TJ... totally random.

Fiery notes ... glorifying​ passion

electric stares ... moments of heat

 

captured emotions ~ in essence

 

hopes cupped --- in trembling hands,

vibrating momentarily ... stilled 

 

~ an unrequited love ~

Reviews

[Kesha]

Short, sad and to the point, I really liked this. I enjoyed this line:

hopes cupped --- in trembling hands

The trembling hands really painted the picture. Wonderfully written!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Kesha. This was actually a challenge Tony gave me to write on 'unrequited love' lol now reading it again, seems like a premonition lol
Thank you for your words here. Glad you like it 😊

[Kesha]

You're welcome and haha yeah it does seem like a premonition

[apennylate]

Tony, Tony, Tony... What a succinct beast of a challenge, and Yumna... Well what can I say... My minds eye vibrated sublime... The essence of passion is electric, and cupped within the cadence of hopeful essence... Nicely penned...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Silente! I enjoyed your review and truly appreciate your words here 😊

[apennylate]

Most welcome, I enjoyed the experimental writing even more than you enjoyed my words over the experimental writing...!

[MsJewel]

Simply beautiful! :) Julie

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for appreciating, Julie 😊

[Tony Jordan]

you certainly captured the fragile hopefulness and the dire realisation of the term in a impartial but sympathetic way here Yumna...go to the top of the class !

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Lol I had to write something 'cause you gave the challenge 😉😛
Thank you, Tony. Glad it came out okay 😊

[Hope]

You have aced the challenge, Yumna!
Short & Sweet poem.
Keep writing:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Naat.
Of course, I will 😛😊

[Hope]

Glad to know:)

[Ken Simm.]

For a challenge and experiment,that is indeed what it is like. Excellent, thoughtful write.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Ken. Glad you appreciate of this experiment. :)

[Mr.Writer]

Wow! You've whipped up another fascinating experiment Yumna!
I can feel the emotions passing out in this poem of shocking love!
Keep it up Yummy Yumna!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

this was more of a challenge by Tony to write on "unrequited love" lol
glad it came out okay. Thank you, Shaan :)

P.S I don't approve of that nickname ;P :|

[Mr.Writer]

Lol,well you've passed the challenge Yumna! :)
Hmm, I didn't ask for your opinion on that nickname btw :P :D

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Well since it's my name you're using to create a nickname out of it, it's kinda my right to approve or disapprove of it 😎😈 lol 😛

[Mr.Writer]

True true :P
How about I place a challenge in front of you Yumna :P
In 6 sentences, describe the feeling of being shattered

[Mr.Writer]

Sorry for the awful challenge lol

[Mr.Writer]

Couldn't think of any other :P

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Lol well I'll think about it 😛 but I can't guarantee if I'll write well on it 😶

[Mr.Writer]

Oh, no problem :)