A Fountain of Love

Random scribbles. Experimenting with creating images...

Erupting horizons ... dreams 

rainbow colours ... engulfed

merged in your colours ~ my life.

Scattered thoughts ... submerged,

in oceanic depths --- now emerges

 

~ a fountain of love. 

Reviews

[Tony Jordan]

I felt the start was like the visual metaphors that movies employ to convey 'la petite mort' (champange bottle popping and foam over-flowing anyone?) but the depth of the form increased aptly, with the depth of the sea. I saw thermal vents of words spewing forth and supporting life from the cold recesses of the ocean.
If this was an exercise in creating images then you did it well Yumna. :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This was def an exercise, Tony. I've just been trying to create images from words that come into my mind over the week (in the opd lol) and wrote it down to see the effect they created 😛😊
Glad it came out well. Thank you for your deep words here. 😊

[Tony Jordan]

YVW Yumna :)
So in your exercises - you're using a phrase to start from?

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ermm probably yeah 😛 I don't think while writing 😉😛

[Tony Jordan]

so you write while you work and you dont think while you write ergo you dont think while you work...? lol

[Tony Jordan]

Only teasing ya lol - I know what you mean. Fair play to you my dear friend.
Now as Vladimir Putin would say "Can't stay...Moscow" (moscow = must go lmao)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Does he say that? Lol

[Tony Jordan]

He might start if he watches the live feed of WC - and let's face it, where else on the InterNet would you find such witty banter hahaha...
Hi Vlad, if you're watching...

[Tony Jordan]

Could you try you imagery skills on this phrase 'unrequited love'...I'd be very interested to see what you come up with. :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahah he'd most probably go insane if he started watching the live feed here 😂😛 even I stopped checking it out 😛

Hmm, it's not many times that little Tony challenges anyone so I'd take this up 😛 can't guarantee though that I will come up with something lol

[Tony Jordan]

haha - so 'You dont have to be mad to be on WC but it helps' is the truth...lmao

Leave your challenge from Tiny Tony until you go back to the OPD ...lol

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Your epic quotes are increasing by the day - or you just started opening up finally lol 😛
Yeah opd and the patients seem to be the inspiration these days 😛😂

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

more of an eruption as tsunami hits the land. and what power it brings

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Aye, and how powerfully it hits to take away the senses too...
thank you for reading this one :)

[MsJewel]

So few words, yet so much beauty... Your talent never ceases to amaze me. :) Julie

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I'm truly humbled by your words. Thank you for liking 😊

[MsJewel]

My pleasure

[Lydia Shutter]

Nice imagery....very romantic. Lydi**

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you. Truly appreciate your words 😊

[Myntlyia]

I am not so sure why I love this one~

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you. Glad you do 😊

[Tony Jordan]

heheh - watch out Yumna...
:)

[Sonakshi Arora]

Woahhhh! You write so deep and meaningful :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Sonakshi. Truly appreciate your words here :)

[Stacy Purvis]

I just adore this so much.
It's a beautiful example of a free flow with scattered thoughts with one purpose.
Thank you for sharing

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for liking this one, Anastasia. Truly appreciate your words 😊

[Kelly Scheppers]

"In oceanic depths now emerges - a fountain of love."

Equating the ocean to depths really compounds the emotive feeling this gives your reader. Its brevity makes it shine!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Kelly. Truly appreciate your words here 😊😊

[Najam Us Saher]

Amazing. There is so much depth in your every sentence. I really liked this.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Najam. Glad you felt the depth here :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh yeah I did 😁 You're welcome.

[Kesha]

A wonderfully written piece :) short and sweet so to say ;)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Kesha. Appreciate your words here :))

[Kesha]

You're welcome :)