Oozing

Experimental Writing.

Words, fragmented​ ... still they broke me 

yours, pierced ... holding stitches on my side

which constantly bleeds, oozing...

 

feelings, evoked ... mere vapours ~

wisps; evaporated ... 

 

your words ~ my undoing.  

Reviews

[Surya]

Truly words do have an ipmact...
I liked it...:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Surya. Glad you liked it 😊

[barleygirl]

This is an interesting assortment of tactile observations conveyed using good imagery. I like the word arrangements that combine sights & sounds (evoked, evaporated, vapours) of the actual words themselves being part of the imagery.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for your interpretation of this piece, BG. Always appreciate it 😊

[Jibey]

Sharp, painful, to the point... Good example of less is more... and pointing up the power of words...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Power of words, yeah that's how it is..
Thank you for appreciating, Jibey.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Intense! Bleeding, piercing words- excellent metaphor and fragmentation of lines as illustration of the imagery. If words could kill....and they can! Very well-written!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

They do for sure. Thank you again, for liking. 😊

[wordman]

words can sooth your soul or tear it apart,words are powerful

[Dr. YumnaKay]

True indeed. And that depends on where they're coming from. Thank you, wordman.

[wordman]

my pleasure