Search me...

Experimental writing...

Search me...

Search me...

and you may find me 

embedded in between your lips

​a​s I take in the taste of you;

devouring ~​ you are.

 

Search me...

in those lonely nights

​when I walked, following a shadow

​that turned out to be yours;

mesmerizing ~ you are.

 

Search me...

as you drift towards sleep

and I'll wake up 

resting on your eyelids;

intoxicating ~ you are.

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Nice experiment, Yumna Dear! : )
Beautifully suggestive first verse to warm the imagination just right; then, verse two kept imploring that we "search" you … there's a thought in itself worth entertaining … LOL!
Verse three implores again as the crescendo soothes to a soothing climax.
I loved how you wrapped-up each verse with a titillating descriptive of your lover … those three words engender a visually appealing poem in themselves.
I especially enjoy it when you let your pen take the reins of your amazing imagination … the picture adds a soft ambience to the feel, too!

I've missed your poetry! ⁓ Richard : )

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Richard. I'm grateful to you for bringing out whatever little poetic voice I do have :)read moreThank you, Richard. I'm grateful to you for bringing out whatever little poetic voice I do have :)
Your appreciation means a lot to me 😊

[Richard🖌]

And, You mean a lot to me! : )

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Loved the middle very beautiful

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you. I'm glad you like it :)

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

And so, who is the brave adventurer to set foot in such depth of a forest? Perhaps she will find a self projection, perhaps another?

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Perhaps is the word alright ;)
I think we all are adventurers ... thank you for reading this one :)

[rowan.taylorrr]

i love the repetition of "you are" it adds intensity

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you. I'm glad you like it :)

[Ken Simm.]

Drifting, romantic and slightly melancholic. Like soft mist. Almost a forbidden pleasure.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for your words here, Ken. Truly appreciate it :)

[Phill Oz O'fee]

What powerful those three words are – and – how they elevate this poetic gem to great heights of reading; Devouring (eats food or prey hungrily or quickly), Mesmerizing (capture the complete attention) & Intoxicating (liable to cause someone to lose control of their faculties or behaviour). Hummmmm…

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for this interesting review, Phill. Truly appreciate it :))

[Rubein Geterminah]

Wow.
So much axillarating.
So much imperatives in this poem to the beloved.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for appreciating :)

[Rubein Geterminah]

You welcome

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful use of words dear dear. Your words demanding and wonderful. You create a masterpiece for trying to find proper places and needs. To be intoxicating by another. Perfect place to know. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for your words here, Coyote. Truly appreciate it 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Poet.

[Ana B.]

This has a very tantalizing note, sort of a hide and seek play of words and sensations. Lovely done dear Yumna :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I like your interpretation of this piece. Thank you for liking, Ana. Always appreciate your words 😊

[Ana B.]

Anytime sweet Yumna :)

[Alice Maria]

This is both romantic and creepy as I feel a stalker vibe, but it was very well written especially while reusing the same phrase 'search me'

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for appreciating this piece, Alice. While this was meant as romantic, I'm glad it came out as creepy too 😉😛

[Alice Maria]

You're welcome. If you have the time, can you please review some of my work?

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Of course. I'll get around to it 😊

[Alice Maria]

Thankyou so much