Blame, Hearts, Poems and Brokenness...

In Collaboration with Silente...

White-flames light gray names on the wall of shame, while pain is believed to be the seed of greed that fillets our brains

...Seamlessly... 

Vile release of craving and I scream, the butterfly sting of transparent opiates leave me stinger-less like a male honey bee, fails, money-trees, and right-of-way...

The way crawls of chaos-dust laced with lunar-graves, fight the lay-away sensation of a crow eating your fate, and sashay away...

 Princess of blame.

As an unknown band of a faraway land in the sands of time, caught betwixt the greasy slime of sublime thyme, rang out in brain-dead rhyme, I strive to achieve the hectic highs and lows of a life spent otherwise, but now time flies

 ...No compromise... 

Just a vague realization of recreational hallucination, manipulation coupled with ruffled mixtures of pictures engraved on the inside of my grave, reenactment of Satan's chimes as my mind lulls blindly, in fact dulls the excruciating pain... 

As you, Prince of my demise.

 Still rule my heart faintly...

Faintly or not, I'm not a saint, the hearts in the paint, and a swathe of harm comes from loving a card taint

As a lark starts to sing for me, but no sound abounds, tempting duress

 ...I simmer...

 My nouns are thin and drowning in a sea of crowns, my pain surrounds my frown, but still I round out syllables

Hard-turned gullible, silk worth drivel, I use a felt-tipped stain to melt my syllabus like veal

 Heal the wilting flower, still ripping hours, that powerful sensation of dripping sour dirt, my earth is shattered and lurching to the side of orbit...

 Hope you know it...

Princess of poets.

Oh don't I know it, blame, hearts, poems and brokenness...

 Swimming in deep waters and lapping around murky weed hopelessly, I refuse to admit defeat sordidly 

 Sorta crawling back, while 

...Again and again...

 Thrown into the ocean's heft, what are you besides an empty vessel, wherein a figment of my imagination lies, while a glimmer of hope sparks, making me look up to the skies

I withdraw from this state of non-being to a universe full of calamity, yet my soul searches, still reaches out to you...

Sweet Prince of broken screams.

Only you...

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

well i like this and i must say that i have read it at least twenty times now and it is like reading me in many ways you are correct. It hearkens to my younger and much darker self when i was a living cocktail of disdain. Looking for punctuation marks to all of my careening scars all the while fabricating more in my aching haunt search. This fellow i do enjoy (as i do you) and should we meet we would more than likely beat the s**t out of us and then hug the familiar scars we would so recognize. We would at the very least bend the space time continuum... if not stop it all together for a moment of movement but that is all that we aspire to... she is as hard to find as last weeks exhale and surrounds us like the last two. This flow.. this rhyme.. in time, made me weep and laugh and want to strike something as i was stricken to its unfold. The familiar self evisceration to rebirth in words anew and renew yes i do like these fellows

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Woah, 20 times, you say?! I'm humbled and I'm sure if Silente had been here he and you would have collaborated brilliantly!
This style of writing was challenging for me but he really encouraged me into it and I'm glad it turned out fine :)
Thank you so much for your extravagant praise, BB. Glad you appreciate :)))

[emmajoy]

Have read three times with space between each reading.. and find it extremely hard to find the joins! That says as much as I can say about your and Silente's collaboration.

The content is more than emotional.. a void that's been filled with treasure for me.. courage, love, focus.. and so much more included.. all worthy. Wonderful.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for the effort you put in understanding this collab, Emma! Believe me, I stumble too while reading Silente's pieces ;p
Glad you appreciate this one too 😊

[Ken Simm.]

What a remarkable and rich themed, beautiful and layered to self culpability. This is Persian carpet complex.
It is to both your credit that the collaboation is seamless

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I think it's more to Silente's credit than mine but I'm glad we did this together.
Thank you for appreciating this collaborative effort, Ken. Truly means a lot 😊

[JacobMarloe]

A beautiful piece, thank you.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, glad you liked it 😊

[Island Hippy]

Aloha, served up like hip hop on a Sunday, that feels straight off the cuff. This would be so good served up slam style. It's smart but slick. Just so damn cool to read. Kolohe good (badass). Congratulations you guys. Not that it matters, Yumna, I think this is my favorite collab of yours! Izzy

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for the wonderful words here, Izzy. I'm glad you liked it. Oh and it matters to me a great deal. 😊😊

[Island Hippy]

You're welcome, you've got some talent my dentist friend :)

[Island Hippy]

Sorry island time internet, posted my comment 3 times.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Nah, it's okay 😊

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Great collaborative effort here. Congrats to you and Silente for weaving this awesome tapestry. Great rhythm, unique rhyme, imagery and wordage. "My nouns are thin and drowning in a sea of crowns"-wow! "Only you".... yes!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for appreciating this collaborative effort, Annette. Glad you like it 😊

[Mr.Writer]

"Sweet Prince of broken screams.
Only you..."
So much feel and emotions that go into it... I really appreciate all the efforts you guys used to write this piece, it must have taken quite a while, and the effect is that the readers really enjoy it and love the rhyming affect and theme even!!
Very well done Yumna and Silente :)
Keep it up!!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hm, well on my part, I worked on the collab with you and this one at the same time 😉😊 so it took equal amount of time...
I'm glad you liked the theme, Shaan. We didn't really set a theme, it just came out this way haha. Truly appreciate your words 😊

[Mr.Writer]

Oh lol :P
You guys are fast workers xD
No problem :)

[Kesha]

Awesome job you guys!! I liked this, you can't even tell who wrote which (although I know :p) I liked the way this all flowed together and the seamless weaving of words!!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahah you know?? Which one did I write? 😎😛
Thank you, Kesha. Glad you liked it. We had fun writing this 😊

[Kesha]

The second & last stanza, since you never start it off in collabs ;) haha. You're welcome!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Oh lol yeah you know now haha 😛😛
I never could 😶😛

[Kesha]

Haha yes :)

[Surya]

You are truly growing by days, I liked how you create works in collabarations, not everyone can do that....
Am glad for you Yumna...
Keep sharing your thoughts....:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Surya! I love collaborations. It's challenging but kinda satisfying too 😉😊
I'm glad you liked it 😊

[Surya]

Yeah challenges, that's how you grow...:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

True that 😊

[danielle.]

Awesome, I love the richness of the rhyming. This would be really cool spoken

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for appreciating this collab 😊