The Beginning of a New Tomorrow

   

                   

The world had always

clawed at her deepest desires, 

wherein she kept them 

hidden in her heart

​,

​​

afraid, that if she voiced them, 

she would be rendered dumb; 

robbed of the power of her voice..

​.​

 

​​

until, it dawned on her; 

to be fearless and to 

rely on her strength.

And she stood 

facing the shore

​,

​as a​

 deep calm washed over her

​.​

The beginning of a new tomorrow

​;​

​the

 rising sun glowing in her eyes

​,​

​a​

s she took in the beauty of the world

​.​

She had missed it; among all the chaos

​...​

​now

, 

​she embraces it.

A sigh crosses her lips,

as she vows, 

to never let go...​

 

https://soundcloud.com/user-557255780/coffee-with-unverhill-04-18-2017     

Thank you, J Todd Underhill for giving voice to my little piece 😊 

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

So profound and beautiful! The image and the words reflect each other...Lyrical form and flow- lovely and original! "The world had always clawed at her deepest desires"...she may have retreated to heal....she recovered and re-entered a better, stronger self..."she vows never to let go"...Love it! Brava!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for your lovely words here, Annette. Truly appreciate it :)

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

You are very welcome-Well-deserved words for sure!:)

[ROXANE DORSEY]

I really enjoyed this piece of poetry. thanks for sharing your talents.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for appreciating. Glad you enjoyed 😊

[APOORVA]

captivative and intelligent writing.
Really a good job

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you. I appreciate your words here :)

[Island Hippy]

Aloha YumnaKay, tomorrow is magic because no one is promised tomorrow it's a hope. So to advance fearlessly means honouring every moment. Stunning poem and your image makes me feel homesick. Izzy

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Your words are more poetic than this poem. Thank you for this beautiful review, Izzy. Glad you liked it 😊

[Island Hippy]

Oh gosh no :) Mahalo I did enjoy it very much.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

And I enjoyed your review 😊

[LeeAnne Peytonn]

"The beginning of a new tomorrow​;​
​the rising sun glowing in her eyes​,​
​a​s she took in the beauty of the world​"

Makes me want to believe that the good is there always, you just have to wake up and see it. Wonderfully done. I love the ocean

[Dr. YumnaKay]

The good is always there, we just need to keep looking.
Thank you, LeeAnne. I'm glad you liked it 😊

[Winslow Des Totes]

I love the message of this piece; it calls for strength and for confidence in the face of adversary. A poignant and well penned write to stir the spirits of even the weakest of souls! Great write!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Winslow. Glad you liked it. And yes, that is what this piece aimed at 😊

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this reminds me of how you put a voice to a sunset through the words you write---your poems are so alive...i am glad i started reading you, and now am able to read you much more often--

this induces a big "sigh"---

j.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Jacob, thank you for your kind words on this piece. I'm humbled at your appreciation...

[Relic]

Learning to go for it is a powerful thing to posses. To put all cares aside and release your inner desires heals.

Nicely written poem here YumnaKay.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

True indeed. Thank you, Relic. Glad you liked it 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

Very good use of words and thoughts. I liked the struggle leading to positive place.
"She had missed it; among all the chaos​...​
​now
, ​she embraces it; a sigh crosses her lips,
as she vows,
to never let go...​"
I liked the above lines a lot and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry my friend.
Coyote

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Coyote. You're always kind in all your appreciation of my works. I'm glad you like it 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome my friend.

[apennylate]

YK! You iz back, I was most worried... What ever would this site be without your smiling... Words...? Face...? Whatever... Strength and inner poise radiate through each syllable drop in the lines... Chaos and abandon... Very well penned...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for noticing my absence, Silente. I wasn't aware I laughed too much here haha 😛😂 don't worry, this site holds too much attraction for me to leave...
Thank you for your words on this piece. I appreciate it 😊

[apennylate]

Of course, friend, it would be like not noticing the sun being eclipsed by angry thunderclouds... Your energy, enthusiasm and cheer, bring a wonderful tone to WritersCafe... It is my pleasure...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That makes me laugh yet again 😛😛 the Cafe should be prepared for not having me around much in a few weeks. But nothing gives me more pleasure than to make people smile around here 😊😊

[apennylate]

I am glad you find my pleasantries humorous... Haha, I am kidding... But seriously, nothing in life can give more pleasure than another persons smile... I would assume that is doubly true for a dentist... Lol

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That is indeed true. I really happy when a patient returns with a smile 😊