If you won't be offended, I find this collaboration to exceed some of your solo efforts, for both of you. It's like there's a chemistry between you that elevates the both of you in this message. There's a palpable lure of fun & danger nicely combined. (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Doesn't offend me a bit, in fact, makes me smile :) That's a lovely observation and perhaps you're r.. read moreDoesn't offend me a bit, in fact, makes me smile :) That's a lovely observation and perhaps you're right re the chemistry. There indeed was at the time this piece was written. .. Thank you so much for appreciating, BG. Glad you like it (:
"Danger is my middle name..." ha ha!!! Love this. It's so cute and romantic!
Thank you for sharing!
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Anastasia Danger Purvis! 😛 I'm really glad you liked this collab! Means a lot .. read moreThank you so much, Anastasia Danger Purvis! 😛 I'm really glad you liked this collab! Means a lot 😊😊
Dangerous is right!!..But beautifully written, hats off to all you guys....There's nothing wrong with living on the edge Yumna😋...Great piece my friend....Once again I smile
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
True.. I agree! Living on the edge is my fav thing sometimes 😉😂
Thank you, Dennis! I'm .. read moreTrue.. I agree! Living on the edge is my fav thing sometimes 😉😂
Thank you, Dennis! I'm glad this made you smile. Really means a lot to me 😊😊
Very very sensual and dangerously exciting! A love poem with an edge... Also love the usage of colours in there with blues and violets being the sensual verses and red with "Oh my darling, what dangerous games we play..." as the climax. I enjoyed this very much!
Beautiful! :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
The colours are more because to discriminate the parts we wrote. Blue being his, and purple mine. Bu.. read moreThe colours are more because to discriminate the parts we wrote. Blue being his, and purple mine. But yeah they do add to the sensual touch..
Thank you, Tina! I'm glad you liked this one. Means a lot 😊😊
I guess we all interpret things differently. But I totally see what you mean. Either way, I loved it.. read moreI guess we all interpret things differently. But I totally see what you mean. Either way, I loved it :)
This was absolutely beautiful, you're right, this one is much deeper my friend ;) I loved how your words flowed perfectly together as if you were one. Nicely done, pure perfection :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Oh, the deeper one is yet to come, Kesha 😉
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked this one.. read moreOh, the deeper one is yet to come, Kesha 😉
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked this one 😊😊
A true collaboration.
I can't sense anything but mutual respect or the other's words here.
Beautifully playful and sweet.
The twist at the end - superb.
Well done you both!
Well, yes. We didn't edit a single word of the other. It's just like it was started 😊 read moreWell, yes. We didn't edit a single word of the other. It's just like it was started 😊
Thank you so much for appreciating, Tony! Means a lot 😊
7 Years Ago
Tony! I'm still waiting for our shelved collab. Thanks for reading this
7 Years Ago
Ah Sir Drift, like a fine wine our collab will only get better when it comes to fruition my friend. .. read moreAh Sir Drift, like a fine wine our collab will only get better when it comes to fruition my friend. You're very welcome both. :))
Yumna you are improving by day, learning new outcomes and their imlementation...
"Oh my darling!
What dangerous game we play..."....a good end for your description... I honestly liked it.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Yes she really did a good job. When we wrote no changes were made. This is the original outcome from.. read moreYes she really did a good job. When we wrote no changes were made. This is the original outcome from the get go.
Oh how beautiful it sounds. I'm glad to have expressed with such a beauty like you. I shall look forward in writing more with you, but I shall be excited more to just talk to such a beaut. 😉
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
lol poetry is a form of talking, Sire ;)
It was nice working with you. I look forward to writ.. read morelol poetry is a form of talking, Sire ;)
It was nice working with you. I look forward to writing more with you too :)