If you won't be offended, I find this collaboration to exceed some of your solo efforts, for both of you. It's like there's a chemistry between you that elevates the both of you in this message. There's a palpable lure of fun & danger nicely combined. (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Doesn't offend me a bit, in fact, makes me smile :) That's a lovely observation and perhaps you're r.. read moreDoesn't offend me a bit, in fact, makes me smile :) That's a lovely observation and perhaps you're right re the chemistry. There indeed was at the time this piece was written. .. Thank you so much for appreciating, BG. Glad you like it (:
If you won't be offended, I find this collaboration to exceed some of your solo efforts, for both of you. It's like there's a chemistry between you that elevates the both of you in this message. There's a palpable lure of fun & danger nicely combined. (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Doesn't offend me a bit, in fact, makes me smile :) That's a lovely observation and perhaps you're r.. read moreDoesn't offend me a bit, in fact, makes me smile :) That's a lovely observation and perhaps you're right re the chemistry. There indeed was at the time this piece was written. .. Thank you so much for appreciating, BG. Glad you like it (:
"Tell me of things you wouldn't say;
and tickle my ears with sin." - The imagery is so vivid it gave me Goosebumps!! Its's like I can feel the warm breath upon my on skin!!
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Well, I'm glad you felt the intensity of the words here. Thank you for appreciating this collaborati.. read moreWell, I'm glad you felt the intensity of the words here. Thank you for appreciating this collaborative effort 😊
So beautiful!! I love the passion and indulgence you have portrayed. My favorite line is "and tickle my ears with sin".
Delicious devilry! ;) Enjoyed the read.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you. I'm glad you liked this collaborative effort. Means a lot to me :)
What an exciting and interesting collaboration. Not sure of the colours ^, perhaps they jolt a little.. but the sentiments are most certainly - warming. Writing about passion so often brings out the very best of thoughts and their underlying imagination/ The use of first person third line somehow cements a fragile devotion.
* Can always add a postscript before or after ..
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
The colours here were used to show the sentiments as well as mine and his favourite colour. His bein.. read moreThe colours here were used to show the sentiments as well as mine and his favourite colour. His being blue, and mine purple. The red colour in the last showing the twist here 😉
Thank you for liking this collaborative effort, Emma. Glad you like it 😊