Such a marvelously gorgeous piece in all ways, Yumna and Michael.
A cowrite by two wondrously accomplished artists, no less, in a sensually romantic mood that sweeps tenderly and sweetly through the emotions of my heart.
The picture, presentation, and poetic enthrallment truly make this a virtual masterpiece of sheer allure to the senses … ummm, my own lips can almost taste the moment.
What's not to love … kudos, you two! ⁓ Richard : )
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Ahh, I'm glad you like this collaborative effort, Richard. Thank you so much. Your words mean a lot .. read moreAhh, I'm glad you like this collaborative effort, Richard. Thank you so much. Your words mean a lot to me :)
Beautifully laid words, a golden chain crafted by two very fine poets. I'll not select special quotes that touch my mind and heart.. it's not something i do.. this is love not a competition. Perhaps i'll just say that this is in my top five favourite Cafe posts at the moment.. a very long moment!
An exquisite and skillful collaboration. Long applause for its beauty and elegance.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
That is a humbling comment for me indeed! Thank you so much for appreciating this collab too, Emma, .. read moreThat is a humbling comment for me indeed! Thank you so much for appreciating this collab too, Emma, though the idea of this collab was solely of Michael (:
Such a marvelously gorgeous piece in all ways, Yumna and Michael.
A cowrite by two wondrously accomplished artists, no less, in a sensually romantic mood that sweeps tenderly and sweetly through the emotions of my heart.
The picture, presentation, and poetic enthrallment truly make this a virtual masterpiece of sheer allure to the senses … ummm, my own lips can almost taste the moment.
What's not to love … kudos, you two! ⁓ Richard : )
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Ahh, I'm glad you like this collaborative effort, Richard. Thank you so much. Your words mean a lot .. read moreAhh, I'm glad you like this collaborative effort, Richard. Thank you so much. Your words mean a lot to me :)
Err okay lol Andrew I see you're taking lessons from Tony haha 😛
Thank you for liking �.. read moreErr okay lol Andrew I see you're taking lessons from Tony haha 😛
Thank you for liking 😊
So eloquently said..
Thank you for the appreciation, Jacob. Glad you like it 😊
7 Years Ago
you are more than welcome...if you get some time, would love a visit from you...
j.
7 Years Ago
My apologies, Jacob. Really, I've been lousy in reviewing these days but will be checking your works.. read moreMy apologies, Jacob. Really, I've been lousy in reviewing these days but will be checking your works soon :)
This form is stunning, richly prosaic with each verse! Overall a beautiful romantic read, in particular I loved the last 3 verses as fragrant as Monet's garden. Masterful writing, I enjoyed this very much. R xo
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you, Ray! I'm glad you liked it. I liked writing in this form :)
Simply beautiful my friend, the imagery was grand, the whole time I was reading all I could see was gorgeous lips...Lol!!...Love it when poetry takes me away like that.. Gorgeous poem my friend....What a homerun!!...Smiled to you on this masterpiece of writing
Poeticme
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
It is a collaborative piece with a fellow writer here so I can't take all the credit 😉
Th.. read moreIt is a collaborative piece with a fellow writer here so I can't take all the credit 😉
Thank you! I'm glad you like it 😊