Nice yumna! But.... Is there something you forgot to tell me? ;)
I thought you said that you were a... Did something happen along the way?
Hahahaha. Jk XD
it's a beautiful Poe
really. Although sorry, I still think real stars are in the sky. :P
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
*poem haha- not Poe.
6 Years Ago
:D Sarah, well...you know now. haha
Thanks so much for reading this one and liking (to an ex.. read more:D Sarah, well...you know now. haha
Thanks so much for reading this one and liking (to an extent:P) I think it depends on who you consider as one. And seeing as how much of a softie I am lol for me they exist in this world ;)
Nice yumna! But.... Is there something you forgot to tell me? ;)
I thought you said that you were a... Did something happen along the way?
Hahahaha. Jk XD
it's a beautiful Poe
really. Although sorry, I still think real stars are in the sky. :P
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
*poem haha- not Poe.
6 Years Ago
:D Sarah, well...you know now. haha
Thanks so much for reading this one and liking (to an ex.. read more:D Sarah, well...you know now. haha
Thanks so much for reading this one and liking (to an extent:P) I think it depends on who you consider as one. And seeing as how much of a softie I am lol for me they exist in this world ;)
I really like the depth of love and affection, which is real only can be felt, cant express as words are less than a feeling that can be only be felt. But you have tried well to explain clearly with imagery.
What a beautifully tender glimpse, full of love and the enchantment of life. This starlit setting comes to life, and one feels the wondrous blending of darkness and light. How it makes the soul smile. :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you for this lovely review of my words, Craig! Truly appreciate it 😊😊
This was amazing! It was soo dreamy, cute and powerful! Mothers...I request you to read this! Yumna, you've written a great poem with outstanding words :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you, Shaan! I'm glad you liked it. Means a lot to me.. 😊
You're getting better in t.. read moreThank you, Shaan! I'm glad you liked it. Means a lot to me.. 😊
You're getting better in this flattery thing by the day 😂😂😂 lol jk 😛😂
Shining brighter than ever, you dim everything else. As I fill my eyes with your light
Wonderfully poetic my friend. Enjoyed this piece, the simplicity of this poem is beautiful, I love when simple words run so deep. Thank you for sharing the beauty of your soul
Poeticme
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you so much, for enjoying this piece and for the appreciation, Poeticme 😊😊
As a mother of three I find it touching. I feel the light in my children's eyes as they grow and learn, and it moves me, as they are forever part of me. Very pretty
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you for appreciating. I'm glad you could relate to this write 😊
Yumnakay,
The love and its continuity when it apples to mother and son/daughter is a delicate subject matter and I often feel and find that only writers with fair sex excel it. However I am of a different opinion regarding the SEX in writers and I even disagree with those who tries to demarcate it.
But if the inner screens unfolds like above I sometimes forget my stands.
excellent attempt indeed
....carry on...............
mp
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Not sure if I understand your comment regarding writers with fair sex, either way I appreciate your .. read moreNot sure if I understand your comment regarding writers with fair sex, either way I appreciate your liking this attempt. Thank you 😊
7 Years Ago
It's nothing . Demarcating man writers and woman writers and area of their strength in few subjects<.. read moreIt's nothing . Demarcating man writers and woman writers and area of their strength in few subjects
That's sexist in my opinion! Anyone can write on any topic regardless of the gender..
7 Years Ago
May be.
But Few lines Simon wrote can not be acheived by Sartre.
I mean it may be a r.. read moreMay be.
But Few lines Simon wrote can not be acheived by Sartre.
I mean it may be a reality.
But I find Kalidasa excel than any woman wirters when he starts exploring a WOMAN MIND.
Or will it be that all woman writers were silenced during the period on gender bias?
mp
7 Years Ago
i demarcate about your view, you just cant say woman writers silenced, they just wont expose on publ.. read morei demarcate about your view, you just cant say woman writers silenced, they just wont expose on public boards, but they do where it needs to be. And this is land where woman is respected like Goddess, we being woman never try to be on public talk, we know where to be like what. "Chandrika". Hope you dont just making fun of your own writings.
We find ourselves when we find peace in the next generation.....your words have expressed so well the heart of the parent and how our whole existence is wrapped around our children.
Great poetry.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Of course fathers can too. But it's harder for them to express themselves verbally as compared with .. read moreOf course fathers can too. But it's harder for them to express themselves verbally as compared with the mothers.
I agree with your sentiments and truly appreciate your liking this piece. Thank you 😊