Essence of Your Scent

Quatrain Verses

Essence of Your Scent

You held me when I needed it most;

your embrace gently soothed my heart,

making me forget all sorrows,

while basking in the essence of your scent.

Your deep blue ocean eyes 

made it easier for me to swim and rise... 

you held my hand, protecting me 

from the cruel world's ravaging waves.

In the essence of your scent I felt free,

like flying birds, chirping away;

with not a worry on their feathery wings...

my eyes close, there's only you; all the rest, a blur!

Author's Note

This came out of nowhere. Just trying to write something different :)

Reviews

[Mr.Writer]

I feel it! I feel it! The words are flowing gently in my soul and heart... Wait for it... wait for it! BOOM! Now, I can write my review :)
Beautiful... engaging... powerful! It shows how much your loved ones do and can do for you! This poem shows that one person can make such a difference in your life! You portrayed the message very well in this poem! Keep it up! :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

True. and I cherish all my loved ones :)
Thank you for this wonderful review. I'm glad you liked it :)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem!

[J Manuel]

Out of spontaneity sometimes comes unexpected beauty. Genuinely knowing the want and need in a partner or friend in times of need is well reflected here, very warmly done.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

True... Thank you for adding your thoughts here and for liking. I appreciate it 😊

[J Manuel]

Your Welcome

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Beautiful flow and imagery. I was sad that the poem had an end.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much, Cyprian! Truly appreciate your words 😊

[Poeticme]

This is a very lovely piece here ma'am, trying​ something different is always interesting... Great Job☺

Poeticme

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for the appreciation. I'm glad you like it 😊

[Giulia King]

I love when words are coming out. Great job on this one :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Gullia! I'm glad you liked this one 😊

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

This sounds so real, where is the false in this? It's like a moment you have just lived.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I'm glad it sounds real. But to me, it's an observation on the part of someone else. Not me..
Thank you 😊

[V]

Softly beautiful writing. You seem to have changed/improved your style a lot. I really like this one. A bright and positive piece for the beginning of spring. xo

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I'm glad you felt the change in my writing style. Thank you so much for liking and the nice comments, V! 😊😊

[V]

Of course. It is a very nice and positive change. 😘

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Positive makes me laugh 😛 since the words in the poem are empty in the personal sense thing lol but good that people can connect. Thanks 💜

[V]

It's interesting though for they don't seem empty. I think it's a talent to write like this; making things seem authentical. Like your words are actors. 😉

[Dr. YumnaKay]

It helps when you read romances all day 😂 words are the best friends I have lol

[V]

Haha, I think you'd have the right premise to be an actress when it comes to research and adapting. 😅
Yes words seem to be so much at times. Multi adaptable lol.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I'd thought of being a singer lol not an actress though an interesting idea 😂

[V]

Haha ok. You can be both. I assume you're multitalented. Lol. Actress is quite cool. I'd have followed a different path in life..😉
"You can be whatever you want to be" - yeah we all know this quote 😛

[Dr. YumnaKay]

It would have been weird me being dentist/singer/actress/writer 😂😂😂

Yeah I can imagine you as an actress! You have the traits def 😉😛
About that quote, I would add 'in your mind' 😂

[V]

Haha yeah lol.

What you can be Everything. Would pretty cool though. I think if I was you, I'd quit dentist though after being successful in the other fields lol.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That would be after... Right now, I'm certain of my career as a dentist only lol

But of course, you have a more objective view of things..

[V]

Haha. Yeah stick to dentist for a while then.
It's a good job also. 😛

[CAPOLAVORO]

So in love. I like how you put a soothing sound by choosing words that would truly create a music at the back of it. Nice.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for this wonderful review and for liking, C! Really means a lot to me 😊

[CAPOLAVORO]

You are very much welcome.

[Krutika]

Beautiful imagery. That feeling of security and joy felt being with someone is put across wonderfully. Your words made me feel those too.
Very well written. Thank you for sharing:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Krutika! I'm glad you felt the depth of my words. Really means a lot 😊