Wow....is it permitted for me to cry? For this doth truly make me weep! It's gorgeous, Yumna. It's happy, emotional and so true. We've all felt these feeling at some point. Anyone who reads this and doesn't feel their heart heat is surely bereft of a soul.
I loved it! (I'm also a little jealous of your skill with words) ;) :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Well, I didn't know someone could cry over this but probably allowable 😉
Thank you so muc.. read moreWell, I didn't know someone could cry over this but probably allowable 😉
Thank you so much for this awesome review, Tina! I feel I don't deserve such praise..
Oh and did I mention I'm jealous of your story writing skills? 😛 so we're even hahah 😂
Thanks again 😊😊😊😊
Speaking from the viewpoint of a mentor,
Every very rare once in a great while, there comes along a special kind of protegé, with such an amazing potential, desire, and drive to learn, she rewards his efforts far beyond any personal gratuity he could ever have expected or foreseen.
Well, the manner, Yumna, in which you've already began taking to the genuine art of poetry with such expedient ease is truly amazing, and how sincerely enjoyable it is to share with you whatever I have to offer, because you make it such a pleasure.
Take this rather complex and advanced Villanelle form, for instance … though, you began studying it only yesterday, your ability to grasp and compose in it eclipses the average student's week of earnest struggle before such enthralling metaphor and versing is possible, not to mention the sheer degree of emotion, feeling, and ambience your words express and create, effecting the reader ever-so deeply and truly.
Well, I could rave on, but lest I wear out my welcome, let me close by offering a simple and humble, "Thank you for your trust in me and for sharing your desire and willingness to learn!"
You're a star, Yumna 🌟 anyone can see that! ⁓ Richard : )
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
I think for a student to excel in something, it's more the part of the teacher's confidence which re.. read moreI think for a student to excel in something, it's more the part of the teacher's confidence which really does the trick. And in this case, if I have a tiny bit of talent, it was brought forward by your sharp eye 😊
My feelings on your appraisal are beyond expressible. Even a simple thank you can not cover that! But I am truly grateful for all you've let me learn, Richard! 😇😇
7 Years Ago
You're an inspiring student, Yumna, with a wonderful potential!
You can't blame me… LOL!
You are going good day by day in your learining experiences, and well your poem was a delight to a lover and i loved every line especially, the first two...:)..
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
With a teacher such as Richard, it's hard not to get better 😇
I'm glad you liked this eff.. read moreWith a teacher such as Richard, it's hard not to get better 😇
I'm glad you liked this effort too, Surya! It means a lot to me 😊😊
'Pon a voice heard, I turned to merry sound, with this one everything turns merry as eyes meet and hearts melt because of your work. Thank you for sharing.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Wow thank you! That's a great compliment! I'm glad you liked it! It means a lot to me 😊😊
Good to be drowned in love and be saved. I liked the positive thoughts leading to the strong ending. Always a pleasure to read your work dear Poet.
Coyote
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Yes, it is. Thank you, Coyote! I'm glad you liked it. It means a lot to me 😊