I like looking up at the moon, thinking it smiles back.
Sometimes, I think it does; whereas, other times, it's as if it disappears from the face of a darkening sky, and those are the nights I frantically keep searching for it to appear, for it to watch over me, because, somehow, I've made myself believe it copies me … that it knows and understands whatever mood I'm in.
Also, I like looking up at the clouds forming shapes, engulfing stars, and occasionally the moon, which makes the sky take on the appearance of how my life feels right now: empty, foreboding, overwhelming darkness everywhere, while I seek a way out to embrace breath-gifting, ached for light.
Yet, it seems as though the darkness has penetrated my very mind, causing me to look at the bleak view from a dimly lit window of my soul, where something resides... sleeping, waiting to be awakened....!
You are the first person in my life that expresses this feeling that my moods are mirrored in the phases of the moon! It's like, with a brand new crescent, life seems to have new promise & with a waning crescent, life feels as if it's slipping thru our fingers. I love hearing the details of how this feels from your perspective & your expressions are artful & relatable (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Ahh, I feel glad to know that you could relate to my words, BG. Always a nice feeling :)
As .. read moreAhh, I feel glad to know that you could relate to my words, BG. Always a nice feeling :)
As a moonchild, I think our lives just revolve around or in regards with the moon. I love the thought somehow.
Thank you so much for your lovely words. Hugs back 💜
You feel as the moon mimics you... searching in this need for wholeness. I feel like I am the moon...alone in the darkness searching for the sun. powerful feelings, adorning perceptions. Thank you for sharing these thoughts to expand my own.
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
I feel one is never whole, we always keep on searching, perhaps that's life. We're always just left .. read moreI feel one is never whole, we always keep on searching, perhaps that's life. We're always just left short of our quest, thirsty. ..
I'm glad you felt this write. Thank you so much.
What a beautiful piece. Pardon me for my binge reading and reviewing, as I am apt to do when I find what I like. The moon speaks to many of us, I think. Perhaps wolves and women are naturally in tune with it.
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
I'm glad you like what you read in my pieces. That humbles me (you used to be one of the constructiv.. read moreI'm glad you like what you read in my pieces. That humbles me (you used to be one of the constructive critics around here when I first joined WC and I'll admit your reviews helped me shape my writings a lot).
Moon has this charm about it which connects me to it and perhaps something to do with me being a moonchild.
Thank you so much for your lovely words here, Lyn. Appreciated.
You are the first person in my life that expresses this feeling that my moods are mirrored in the phases of the moon! It's like, with a brand new crescent, life seems to have new promise & with a waning crescent, life feels as if it's slipping thru our fingers. I love hearing the details of how this feels from your perspective & your expressions are artful & relatable (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Ahh, I feel glad to know that you could relate to my words, BG. Always a nice feeling :)
As .. read moreAhh, I feel glad to know that you could relate to my words, BG. Always a nice feeling :)
As a moonchild, I think our lives just revolve around or in regards with the moon. I love the thought somehow.
Thank you so much for your lovely words. Hugs back 💜
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It is very true in accordance with my life. Being a Cancer myself, I've always felt a deep connectio.. read moreIt is very true in accordance with my life. Being a Cancer myself, I've always felt a deep connection and calling with with and from the moon. She is a beaut!
7 Years Ago
Ahh another Cancerian! Yes, I was aware of that theory. Kinda makes us feel special 😉😊
.. read moreAhh another Cancerian! Yes, I was aware of that theory. Kinda makes us feel special 😉😊
Thank you, Kelly. Glad you liked it.
Such beautiful, breathtaking imagery of that moonless night you give us there...
The connection of people's mind to the darkness of the night is just right on and emotional as well!
Keep it up
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you for appreciating, Shaan. Truly means a lot :)
I love the tie to the moon. I can relate and it is so true how we throw our emotions at it and expect it to react and mirror.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Well, it does mirror me often..
I'm glad you can relate. Truly appreciate your words. Thank y.. read moreWell, it does mirror me often..
I'm glad you can relate. Truly appreciate your words. Thank you 😊
I like the way you draw us into the person's relationship with the moon, and its relationship with obscuring clouds, and how all of this mirrors what the person in the story sees as the state of their life. I think it's well done with some evocative phrases, and I certainly buy into the breath-gifting light. Nice job!
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
It does seem to cover how one's life feels like..
Thank you for appreciating. 😊