Gratitude ~ For Tony Jordan

Good friends are like stars... you don't always see them, but you know that they're always there.

In a world

where friendship works

as give and take,

in a world 

where selflessness seems

hard to believe,

in a world 

where love lurks

in shadows,

in a world 

where darkness prevails

over light,

some people are just there.

Silent; yet ever present ...

Reviews

[Ghania]

"Silent, yet ever present"

Oh, Dr.Yumna, I love how you play beautifully with words. It's aspiring!! This is SO good!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ah, I'm so glad you came by this write, Ghania. This is probably my most treasured and written from the heart piece.
Thank you so much for appreciating :))

[Ghania]

Oh, you're very welcome.
That I can see, it's dedicated to Tony. Your best friend. And it inspires me to write one too. :)))

p.s I think every piece you write shows itself how much effort you put into it and every piece of yours is a treasure. That's really great.

[Ghania]

*for my best friend :p

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Aye, so he is :))
and that humbles me, I always try to now, though I wasn't like this before haha ;)

[Ghania]

Ha ha ha! No, I have read some of your previous ones, they're equally amazing. It's just that you're humble. :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Careful there, Ghania. Some people might not like you saying that about me lmaooo jk thanks again xx

[Ghania]

Ha ha ha!!! Oopsiee. I don't give af(lamingo)!!
I like your work. And that's it. Also, nobody's perfect.

[Ty]

"In a world where darkness prevails
over light" Truth. Let the truth be told

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for your words here :)

[Mr.Writer]

Very nice poem to show gratitude that uses different emotions as well :)
How sweet of you
Keep it up

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for appreciating this one as well, Shaan. :))

[emmajoy]

A great tribute to the recipient and a sweet reflection on the writer too. When you really know exactly who and what people are, there's always something very special in residence.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

The least I could do to the kindness Tony shows...
There is something special indeed in some friendships we have regardless of boundaries..
Thank you for appreciating this piece, Emma :)

[Siddhartha]

A friendship that never waxes or wanes. Affection lurks in the shadows, invisible yet ever present.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for your thoughts :)

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

This is a very nice thing you did here

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Well, I am proud to have written this. Thank you 😊

[Kesha]

This is a wonderful piece, even if it feels like you're alone, if you have that one true friend, you're really not alone. What a great write, nicely done :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Absolutely yes! I feel blessed really 😊
Thank you for liking, Kesha! Means a lot 😊😊

[Kesha]

Thats good :) and you are welcome! :D

[Isabella Ivy]

A observation penned in gratitude for the good character of another. A rare find both :) I.I.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

It is a rare find, I agree! Thank you for your thoughts 😊

[Isabella Ivy]

Thank you for allowing me to read your work! :) I.I.

[Bala Gorthi]

I agree. Presence of some such precious people makes one a blessed one. A good piece for your friend..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Indeed they do. Thank you, Bala! I'm glad you liked this one :)

[Bala Gorthi]

You are welcome.

[Alisa Js]

Aloha,

This one is lovely and so very true.

Thanks for sharing..

Alisa

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)