Your Touch

Fictional.

Just when I had finally decided to let you go, you came back right in. Barging through the almost closed doors of my heart! You made sure they weren't closed until you were through them. 

And here you are, I'm just too tired to make a move. Too tired to say anything. But there again, it seems you don't need any prompting.  

Oh, how my heart races when my eyes meet yours! And although I'm a fool, I can't help but make myself believe that this time.. this time you've finally returned, never to leave again.  

Your hands touch mine. You're giving me this shy, bring it on kind of smile and I try not to appear much bothered about it. Why? Because, eventually, I know where we'll end up tonight. ..

You're trying so hard not to rush things but at the same time, you're doing what you've always made me feel. Oh, this feels hot as hell! What with your fingers running along in circles over my palm ..

Damn, I can't think straight! This is too much to bear. As you grab me by the waist, I'm rediscovering your touch. I don't want you to stop and it feels as if you aren't going to. 

It's going to be a long night. 

I hope we remember from where we'd left.

Author's Note

Minor changes done. Credits: emmajoy ☺

Reviews

[emmajoy]

This is more like a whispered telling than a piece of writing.. There are errors a speaker makes, there are pauses and repeats.. natural when emotional. And, all the while there's this voice, one's own, guiding the thoughts into action. Tis a passionate finish.. again, more than mere words. t

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hey, thank you! Would you kindly point out the errors in this piece as I'm kind of new to this sort of writing but ready to improve 😉
I appreciate your take on this ☺

[emmajoy]

November 2018.. For me, dear friend, this whispers.. as it should. Such tender thoughts and feelings, private, precious, passionate. Meant for that one other person who means anything, everything. You've written probably less than this review will be, but, you've told an entire and beautiful dream come true. Wonderful in every aspect a post should include and, that's nothing to do with my hints but your skill absolute. x

[Dr. YumnaKay]

It's strange reading it again and knowing how much time has passed since I wrote it. I think your hints do inspire me to write on, Em. xx

[emmajoy]

We're here to help each other in whatever way. You so often help and inspire me too! :)

[Chris Shaw]

Plenty of hope in this write that everything will be rekindled and I am standing here shouting 'a leopard never changes its spots". Thoroughly entertaining Dr Y.

Chris

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hah well, you're right! I'm not much a fan of second chances myself ;P
Thank you so much for reading and appreciating! :))

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful story telling my dear friend. Your description made the tale come alive for the reader. Perfect ending. A wide open ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I do like open ending and leaving it upto the reader's imagination. I'm glad you like it. Thank you so much for appreciating :))

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my dear friend.

[Mr.Writer]

Oh my... So touching and sensational!
This magnificent piece shows how love can change everything.
Very exotic and cool :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Oh oh this should be under the mature category lol 😛
Thank you for checking this out, Shaan 😊

[Mr.Writer]

Lol XD no problem

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

And yet another write to the mysterious person

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Oh no lol this is another piece of fiction and imagination 😉😛

[Jessica Lima]

It feels like I'm reading you journal. I'm usually into poetry because it makes you feel something. Though this doesn't rhyme I can still imagine what you felt and I've gone thru something just like it. Good work.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Jessica, thank you so much! I'm glad you felt this piece. This is a purely fiction though and as they, let your imagination loose, that's what happened here 😉

[An owl on the moon]

Powerful confessions of the soul and skin, of love's intoxicating flames. In the music of your heartbeat there is that rushing pulse of light that burns off all darkness and fills the night with fire. One can feel the absolute ecstasy flooding your imagination's kingdom in anticipation. I believe even the sunrise will be blushing when all is awakened.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much, Craig for the awesome poetic review!
I'm glad you could feel the emotions here 😊

[An owl on the moon]

Ah, nothing ripples with wonder quite like passion. :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

True indeed 😊

[aLittlePain]

Very smooth write, quite lyrical qualities here. Very RnB'sy feel, by way of your word choice. Those 'pasts' always walk the line that borders our lives. Great pour. R xo

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I agree, they do, only to make us crazier than we already are..
Thank you, Ray, for the nice words and appreciation! Means a lot to me ☺

[V]

A lovely one, smooth, soft and exciting.

How they walk back so gently in our lives at times, reviving the things we wanted to forget. And still, could never really rid ourselves of and we surrender again to them, to the bits of hope instilled in us.

Makes me think if Frank Ocean's "Never go back to something that hurt
you" is rigid and stubborn or just way too radical for the frequent dreamers..
But never second chances and new beginnings seem so merciless..

I enjoyed reading this. Very nice.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I agree, it seems we never really learn how to let go entirely, always keeping a tiny flame lit inside us. And letting them in because we're so used to their presence..
I'm glad you enjoyed this one, Vanessa! And thank you for liking!
I hope you're having a good day ☺

[mercy party]

You told yourself you'd never stay no matter how good they are in other ways, whoops! back to the drawing board.
'bring it on kid' kind of smile, very slick line!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahah thank you, MP! I find the whole idea of love as slick 😛
I appreciate your take on this ☺

[mercy party]

i just wrote my first blog about it, my take on love. ck it out.