I like short pieces like this ... they rarely stand as the highlight of a writer's portfolio but nevertheless, they're nice to read from time to time. As for this piece, I love how it expresses a nice message ... the last line added an ironic touch, a great addition to the overall satirical voice.
I agree with the overall message, in that cleverness with words doesn't always make an entertaining poem. Sometimes, a poem may be too verbose ... with the individual lines standing well on their own, but not harmonizing together in unity. Although you wrote this as a self-realization, it stands well as a message to all writers.
William, thank you for your thoughts here.. This was indeed a self-realization because as I went thr.. read moreWilliam, thank you for your thoughts here.. This was indeed a self-realization because as I went through my past writings I realized what a long way I have to go still... Your words means alot to me 😊
7 Years Ago
We all have a long way to go ... there's always something to learn.
Totally agree! And no offense taken 'cause I don't even consider myself a writer yet 😉
Th.. read moreTotally agree! And no offense taken 'cause I don't even consider myself a writer yet 😉
Thank you for your views ☺
I like short pieces like this ... they rarely stand as the highlight of a writer's portfolio but nevertheless, they're nice to read from time to time. As for this piece, I love how it expresses a nice message ... the last line added an ironic touch, a great addition to the overall satirical voice.
I agree with the overall message, in that cleverness with words doesn't always make an entertaining poem. Sometimes, a poem may be too verbose ... with the individual lines standing well on their own, but not harmonizing together in unity. Although you wrote this as a self-realization, it stands well as a message to all writers.
William, thank you for your thoughts here.. This was indeed a self-realization because as I went thr.. read moreWilliam, thank you for your thoughts here.. This was indeed a self-realization because as I went through my past writings I realized what a long way I have to go still... Your words means alot to me 😊
7 Years Ago
We all have a long way to go ... there's always something to learn.