Manipulator

Manipulator

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Just playing around :p

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Look in my eyes. 
Yes.. slow and deep. 
Tell me, what do you see? 
Oh... you realized, 
yes, you are being hypnotized. 
Search me... I'm a Manipulator, 
I'll lead you 
to the place 
where you shouldn't be 
and you'll do things 
which will make you 
look like a fool... 
again and again. 
Because 
I'm a 
manipulator, 
the likes of which 
you have never seen... 



© 2018 Dr. YumnaKay


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Aha! I have been looking for this one ever since you showed me it- now... To find the othe one....

Any ways I suck at reviewing for real. Hmm. I like this.
It makes you seem like a Disney villain who is smug with power haha-
This was like you holding up a mirror so I could see my self in this poem... Nice work!
That is me trying on a review... (I have found something to add to my list of enemies; reviewing)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Years Ago

I don't think you're bad at reviewing, Sarah :) but interesting that you see yourself in this poem. .. read more



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This recalled the snake -Kaa - out of Disneys Jungle book.
We all learn to manipulate before we learn to speak. Babies learn that wailing gets them things - food, attention, The Walls Street journal, etc.
We learn that manipulating isnt an acceptable way to interact and in the main we dont use it but we all 'have it' - we just dont 'bring it'.
Excellent unique piece YumnaKay

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

Lol for a few hours only then 😛😂
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Just enough time for your leather wings to become priity lace ones again ...awwww
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

Lol err right 😝
So that is why I've been a dumbass so many times when it comes to the ladies...I'm using that as my excuse from now on :)


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

Hahaha.. I think men are far bigger manipulators then the women.😉 but suit what you like 😂 read more
Lorry

7 Years Ago

You're probably right, but am I just saying that to manipulate you into thinking my way? :)
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

haha now you confused me ;p
Reading your caption, I'm impressed by what you'd call "just playing". Again, you touch on a scenario that many can recall -- or is it you doing the manipulating? ;)

Wonderful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

Haha the latter, I think😂
Thank you for liking and reviewing this fun(read: pun) intended .. read more
Asante

7 Years Ago

Haha. Fierce! :)

My pleasure, friend.
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

😂😂😂....
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Terrifying and troublesome. Conjures up images of a "gypsy" in the older times, although I do think the ethnic group still exists.

This piece reminds me of a certain movie I cannot pin-point! But great job on the imagery, if that is where you were taking this piece; I know poems can be interpreted in many different ways.

I enjoyed the story of it.

The last line creates the uneasiness, as if the one being spoken to is no longer in control of the situation.

Spooky.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

Should I be worried that you find it troublesome?😉
It was meant as a pun.. Also for the f.. read more

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