Look in my eyes. Yes.. slow and deep. Tell me, what do you see? Oh... you realized, yes, you are being hypnotized. Search me... I'm a Manipulator, I'll lead you to the place where you shouldn't be and you'll do things which will make you look like a fool... again and again. Because I'm a manipulator, the likes of which you have never seen...
Aha! I have been looking for this one ever since you showed me it- now... To find the othe one....
Any ways I suck at reviewing for real. Hmm. I like this.
It makes you seem like a Disney villain who is smug with power haha-
This was like you holding up a mirror so I could see my self in this poem... Nice work!
That is me trying on a review... (I have found something to add to my list of enemies; reviewing)
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
I don't think you're bad at reviewing, Sarah :) but interesting that you see yourself in this poem. .. read moreI don't think you're bad at reviewing, Sarah :) but interesting that you see yourself in this poem. Thanks so much for reading and appreciating :D
This recalled the snake -Kaa - out of Disneys Jungle book.
We all learn to manipulate before we learn to speak. Babies learn that wailing gets them things - food, attention, The Walls Street journal, etc.
We learn that manipulating isnt an acceptable way to interact and in the main we dont use it but we all 'have it' - we just dont 'bring it'.
Excellent unique piece YumnaKay
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Well you'll be surprised to find there are quite a lot of people using this "gift".. I would say its.. read moreWell you'll be surprised to find there are quite a lot of people using this "gift".. I would say its an art :p
Thank you for liking and reviewing :)
7 Years Ago
I never said I liked it!!
Lol - kidding
Just using my 'gift' there to.. read moreI never said I liked it!!
Lol - kidding
Just using my 'gift' there to make you feel momentarily uncomfortable...lol
;)
7 Years Ago
Hahaha.. You can't easily make me feel like that 😉
Usually when a person likes something,.. read moreHahaha.. You can't easily make me feel like that 😉
Usually when a person likes something,its only then that they review it..so I assumed correct 😂
7 Years Ago
Wow I've only know you a month Key.
It seems like a lifetime 😉
7 Years Ago
Hahaha one hell of a lifetime is what you maybe thinking😛
Has it been just a month? I don.. read moreHahaha one hell of a lifetime is what you maybe thinking😛
Has it been just a month? I don't even remember 😂
7 Years Ago
You dont remember - you've been counting the seconds minutes and hours and days and weeks - go on ad.. read moreYou dont remember - you've been counting the seconds minutes and hours and days and weeks - go on admit it Key, go on, go on Key.
haha 😛
7 Years Ago
Hahaha no I haven't! I actually love being here 😉
7 Years Ago
And we love you too Key ... (jeez who is this maniac...eh..what..no...I never opened my mouth...espe.. read moreAnd we love you too Key ... (jeez who is this maniac...eh..what..no...I never opened my mouth...especially when the demon dentist is around)
7 Years Ago
Haha I said I love "being around here" lol
Am I the devil now? 😂😂😂
7 Years Ago
haha well played.
You're only the devil when you're awake. I bet you're an angel when your as.. read morehaha well played.
You're only the devil when you're awake. I bet you're an angel when your asleep
Hahaha.. I think men are far bigger manipulators then the women.😉 but suit what you like 😂 read moreHahaha.. I think men are far bigger manipulators then the women.😉 but suit what you like 😂
Thanks for the nice review ☺
7 Years Ago
You're probably right, but am I just saying that to manipulate you into thinking my way? :)
Reading your caption, I'm impressed by what you'd call "just playing". Again, you touch on a scenario that many can recall -- or is it you doing the manipulating? ;)
Haha the latter, I think😂
Thank you for liking and reviewing this fun(read: pun) intended .. read moreHaha the latter, I think😂
Thank you for liking and reviewing this fun(read: pun) intended piece😂😂😉
Terrifying and troublesome. Conjures up images of a "gypsy" in the older times, although I do think the ethnic group still exists.
This piece reminds me of a certain movie I cannot pin-point! But great job on the imagery, if that is where you were taking this piece; I know poems can be interpreted in many different ways.
I enjoyed the story of it.
The last line creates the uneasiness, as if the one being spoken to is no longer in control of the situation.
Spooky.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Should I be worried that you find it troublesome?😉
It was meant as a pun.. Also for the f.. read moreShould I be worried that you find it troublesome?😉
It was meant as a pun.. Also for the fact that I'm known as a manipulator among my friends and family.😂
I'm glad you enjoyed it.. Spookyness was intended...thank you for liking and reviewing ☺