Manipulator

Just playing around :p

Look in my eyes. 
Yes.. slow and deep. 
Tell me, what do you see? 
Oh... you realized, 
yes, you are being hypnotized. 
Search me... I'm a Manipulator, 
I'll lead you 
to the place 
where you shouldn't be 
and you'll do things 
which will make you 
look like a fool... 
again and again. 
Because 
I'm a 
manipulator, 
the likes of which 
you have never seen... 

Reviews

[LazerRays]

Aha! I have been looking for this one ever since you showed me it- now... To find the othe one....

Any ways I suck at reviewing for real. Hmm. I like this.
It makes you seem like a Disney villain who is smug with power haha-
This was like you holding up a mirror so I could see my self in this poem... Nice work!
That is me trying on a review... (I have found something to add to my list of enemies; reviewing)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I don't think you're bad at reviewing, Sarah :) but interesting that you see yourself in this poem. Thanks so much for reading and appreciating :D

[Onlyme]

A manipulator. Who bamboozles you with style and flare and class. Nicely expressed.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Aye, sometimes even harder to believe one was manipulated. We like thinking we're our own masters. .. thank you so much for reading and appreciating, Dawn :)

[θεά]

So dark, but fortunately an honest admission by the narrator. Reminds me of Agatha Christie's 'Murder of Roger Ackroyd' and 'Endless Night' where the perp acts as the narrator.

Very well laid out, Yumna.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

And very few who'll admit openly to being one ;)
Thank you so much for appreciating this oldie, Mallika :)

[θεά ]

I think a few fools would gloat. But I don't think they'd be the ones laughing. ;)

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Oh my, manipulation at its finest, a hypnotist I see...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

glad you figured that out ;)

[Bare trees]

I thought maybe you were talking about a donut. :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Haha that's funny! No it's actually people I talk about here.. They're so easy to manipulate, you know 😉

[Bare trees]

I've never tried actually. But I do know what you mean. I promise not to manipulate you if you do the same for me. Okay?

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Haha I don't make promises which I can't keep 😛😂

[Bare trees]

Hmm? I'll have to keep my 'eye' out for you then. :p

[Dr. YumnaKay]

And I'll be sure to be out of range of your 'eye'😉

[Bare trees]

Not a chance, I'm the all seeing eye.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hah we'll see 😛

[Lovecraft]

Ha, I found this entertaining and pretty funny in a weird way. For just playing around, it is pretty good.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Haha thank you! Glad you found it entertaining! I guess you have never been manipulated before, maybe that's why 😂😂😂

[Lovecraft]

Oh, I have. :P

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Oh that must have been bad.. Sorry😛

[Unknown Poet]

Haha good hypnotic write ...keepitup

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for being hypnotized 😂
I'm glad you liked it ☺

[Unknown Poet]

My pleasure...

[tanmay7551]

Amazing! This presents either a magician or superpowers or simply a person manupulating someone in love. It so happens many times that you are with a wrong person and get enchanted with their charms and later repent for your mistake. In future you sometime laugh over your foolish act as well.

Well written.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you! Yeah it does feel like that. But I think its good to be the manipulator 😉 thank you for liking and reviewing ☺

[tanmay7551]

Haha! Oh yes, one has to choice to be on the either side.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Exactly 😂

[Ted Kniffen]

Yumna, you old spell binder you, look into my hazel eyes, I'm not that easy to hypnotize, but take me to places I shouldn't be. Mesmerizing poem. Good write

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Haha seems as if you are a good manipulator yourself 😉
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, Ted ☺

[WittyWonka]

Many of us are susceptible to the manipulation of others and can often find ourselves in any number of places we should not be. Well written and thought provoking.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Yes indeed.. The main thing is to decide whether we want to be manipulated or to "be" the manipulator 😉
Thank you for liking and reviewing ☺