Look in my eyes. Yes.. slow and deep. Tell me, what do you see? Oh... you realized, yes, you are being hypnotized. Search me... I'm a Manipulator, I'll lead you to the place where you shouldn't be and you'll do things which will make you look like a fool... again and again. Because I'm a manipulator, the likes of which you have never seen...
Aha! I have been looking for this one ever since you showed me it- now... To find the othe one....
Any ways I suck at reviewing for real. Hmm. I like this.
It makes you seem like a Disney villain who is smug with power haha-
This was like you holding up a mirror so I could see my self in this poem... Nice work!
That is me trying on a review... (I have found something to add to my list of enemies; reviewing)
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
I don't think you're bad at reviewing, Sarah :) but interesting that you see yourself in this poem. .. read moreI don't think you're bad at reviewing, Sarah :) but interesting that you see yourself in this poem. Thanks so much for reading and appreciating :D
A manipulator. Who bamboozles you with style and flare and class. Nicely expressed.
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Aye, sometimes even harder to believe one was manipulated. We like thinking we're our own masters. ... read moreAye, sometimes even harder to believe one was manipulated. We like thinking we're our own masters. .. thank you so much for reading and appreciating, Dawn :)
Aha! I have been looking for this one ever since you showed me it- now... To find the othe one....
Any ways I suck at reviewing for real. Hmm. I like this.
It makes you seem like a Disney villain who is smug with power haha-
This was like you holding up a mirror so I could see my self in this poem... Nice work!
That is me trying on a review... (I have found something to add to my list of enemies; reviewing)
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
I don't think you're bad at reviewing, Sarah :) but interesting that you see yourself in this poem. .. read moreI don't think you're bad at reviewing, Sarah :) but interesting that you see yourself in this poem. Thanks so much for reading and appreciating :D
So dark, but fortunately an honest admission by the narrator. Reminds me of Agatha Christie's 'Murder of Roger Ackroyd' and 'Endless Night' where the perp acts as the narrator.
Very well laid out, Yumna.
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
And very few who'll admit openly to being one ;)
Thank you so much for appreciating this old.. read moreAnd very few who'll admit openly to being one ;)
Thank you so much for appreciating this oldie, Mallika :)
6 Years Ago
I think a few fools would gloat. But I don't think they'd be the ones laughing. ;)
I thought maybe you were talking about a donut. :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Haha that's funny! No it's actually people I talk about here.. They're so easy to manipulate, you kn.. read moreHaha that's funny! No it's actually people I talk about here.. They're so easy to manipulate, you know 😉
7 Years Ago
I've never tried actually. But I do know what you mean. I promise not to manipulate you if you do th.. read moreI've never tried actually. But I do know what you mean. I promise not to manipulate you if you do the same for me. Okay?
7 Years Ago
Haha I don't make promises which I can't keep 😛😂
7 Years Ago
Hmm? I'll have to keep my 'eye' out for you then. :p
Haha thank you! Glad you found it entertaining! I guess you have never been manipulated before, mayb.. read moreHaha thank you! Glad you found it entertaining! I guess you have never been manipulated before, maybe that's why 😂😂😂
Amazing! This presents either a magician or superpowers or simply a person manupulating someone in love. It so happens many times that you are with a wrong person and get enchanted with their charms and later repent for your mistake. In future you sometime laugh over your foolish act as well.
Thank you! Yeah it does feel like that. But I think its good to be the manipulator 😉 thank you fo.. read moreThank you! Yeah it does feel like that. But I think its good to be the manipulator 😉 thank you for liking and reviewing ☺
8 Years Ago
Haha! Oh yes, one has to choice to be on the either side.
Yumna, you old spell binder you, look into my hazel eyes, I'm not that easy to hypnotize, but take me to places I shouldn't be. Mesmerizing poem. Good write
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Haha seems as if you are a good manipulator yourself 😉
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, .. read moreHaha seems as if you are a good manipulator yourself 😉
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, Ted ☺
Many of us are susceptible to the manipulation of others and can often find ourselves in any number of places we should not be. Well written and thought provoking.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Yes indeed.. The main thing is to decide whether we want to be manipulated or to "be" the manipulato.. read moreYes indeed.. The main thing is to decide whether we want to be manipulated or to "be" the manipulator 😉
Thank you for liking and reviewing ☺