Musings Of A Lost Soul

Wounds marked on my soul

Make me wonder what I did 

To get them, to earn them

These scars have uncovered a new way

For me to fly away

To not care 

To not flare 

Now don't you dare 

Come near

You don't affect me anymore 

The way you did before

I am gonna go

Coz I'm a lost soul 

Without a goal 

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

lost soul.. without goal? and wounded as well? wow! quite an fascinating poetry you have come up with. love leaves its flawless scars on the breath of body that further... and oft. awakes 'em all overnight. very nice musing you got, sweetlips. nice imagery here!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Seems to me as if you mock me(kidding)😂 but thanks

[Adam Adams]

if that's okay to throw some smiles on your face, even mocking your breath ain't gonna too bad. xoxo

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Err thanks 😉

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

I dont think you should let the surrounding decide your inside. Theres always going to be that little rock that makes you trip, it doesnt mean you stay buried in the floor, you should always come back from it

[Dr. YumnaKay]

you know what, I like your philosophies a lot :)

[Bala Gorthi]

Yes, this happens. Our wounds make us indifferent to things first and later to people. I also have similar thought..
The pain definitely is there and will be there but the resolution is clear, the message is very clear..
Again a beautifully crafted touching write...
Keep up the good work, YumnaKay!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much Bala, for your kind words. Pain wil always be felt to those of us who care.

[Bala Gorthi]

You are welcome, this a perfect write.. But I have a suggestion if you don't mind.. The second line first word make it "make" in place of "makes".. It is about wounds (plural) making someone wonder. I personally don't like giving suggestions with out being asked, but in your case I am taking this Liberty..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I don't mind. You pointed out the right thing. Thank you. Please feel free to correct me wherever you think something is missing ☺

[Lorry]

Sad, yet honest words from the heart. I have felt this. When you feel your soul has gone, is just when you need it the most.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

True indeed. There are people around here who do feel that but the main thing is to cope up with the surroundings and act like nothing is lost. Thank you for the review!

[Papaya]

I think the ending is rather tragic but unfortunately very real for those people who give up on life.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Every person in life goes through a situation where they do give up on life even if it is for a second, but we should learn to be strong. Thanks for the review.

[Papaya]

Yes, if survive it all then we do become either stronger or desensitized. But we're survivors.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Indeed, I agree with you.