Paper

Upon the vague pool of white
Her body I have found
Sailing softly in her flight
Sleeping safe and sound

I've called it words,
This space between my fingers
Whilst traced with yours
Compose a sentence where they linger

Watched each period . pause her breath
And comma , slow the gasps
As there my hands explore with death
Your body of paragraphs

Call it passion this we hold
And watch just how she bloom
A body inked in black and bold
Placing love within the womb
To title her... Beloved

Reviews

[bella]

Interesting for you to write about passion of all people since you have passion for everyone you see and now apparently everything

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Passion for no one. Only the empty she'll I once believed be real

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words and thoughts. Each paragraph strong and worthwhile. This is amazing use of words. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding chapter.,
Coyote

[KWP]

What is meta writing? I have no idea ...

I like the softness you conjure here. It’s really rather clever what you have done. Although I am not sure writing is like making love with the paper ... um, well no. Paper is no substitute for the real thing ;) The passion I get.

It’s like a lullaby and love song mixed together. Nice one X

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

I know exactly what you mean. Yes, paper is nothing compared to the body of a lover. Oh Missy what have you stirred in me? Thank you for dropping by.

[Ms Paragon]

Such a fine example of meta-writing!You've managed to perfectly portray the erotic relationship between the writer and their writings!Nice work!

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

A difficult task it was, but I always love to face a challenge. I appreciate you taking the time for this

[Ms Paragon]

My pleasure!

[Laurierose]

Amazing. I thoroughly enjoyed the intricacies in this poem. This was so creative and imaginative. "Call it passion this we hold..." was one of my favorite. Then again, I enjoyed the whole thing. Great read.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Thanks k you kindly for taking the time to read this

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"body of paragraphs" that's a lovely metaphor. Only you could write about writing in such a sensual way, Sire. I guess my favourite are the last lines. Beautiful piece 😊

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

I always wish to write about things unthinkable, so why not write about writing? It's a stretch I know, but I love the challenge, yes those last lines are something for the one person that matters.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Of course, what's the good in it without a challenge ;)
I hope they're well appreciated then :)

[Papaya]

Writing is a little like making love to the paper with our words and sometimes it's making love through our words. Whichever it is, it is always satisfying to see the outcome and appreciate it. There is a lovely and sensual flow to your words. Fitting for a piece titled Beloved.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

You never cease to leave wonderful words. Thank you Papaya. Who would have thought that a piece of paper can stir so many emotions

[Papaya]

A blank page can be filled with so much.
You're welcome. :)