One Dress Flower

Published in the Australian Magazine “Pastel Magazine Issue #3” Edited as appears in magazine

And wishes she, for a man
To cherish hers, a flower
From which she gifts her petals
To all others
Leaving nothing but a stem
For Him to ponder
Naked in the end

Reviews

[bella]

You have to appreciate the person willing to give you it all.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

That's very true Bella... Even if it is just a little. Anything given could be cherished... Especially from an "Angel" 😊

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Hmm beautiful- to wish for someone to love and cherish you down to the bare ness of your soul- what a special appreciation and love that will be - wonderful🌹

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Yes. Wishing for an everything from a special person is the most beautiful gift they can give youread moreYes. Wishing for an everything from a special person is the most beautiful gift they can give you

[Coyote Poetry]

A complete story in so few words my friend. You create character, situation and proper ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing chapter.
Coyote

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Coyote, you always have the best words to say. I owe you one, friend

[Coyote Poetry]

This is amazing my friend.

[Davidgeo]

From reading this I thought about excessive people pleasing with a side of abandonment complex leading to perpetual relationship underperformance.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

And so, it speaks to lore than just one side of it's nature. Yes sir, you are pretty damn right

[Davidgeo]

Nah, I'm just reading... you are the one who is pretty damn right.

[Papaya]

This is stunning. Nothing more to add. :)

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Papaya! How I've missed you. Thank you for reading this silliness

[Papaya]

You are very welcome! :)