10. Appearance

Is it you who I behold? 

My betrothed, young, bright, bold 

Is it you, covered cotton white… 

Veil of purity, a love done right? 

 

Lips bright fire red 

The shining sky on your head 

Eyes of solid ground, stronger 

Than boulders, mountains ponder 

 

Hands hold healings, fingers of needles 

Sowing my wounds into pockets 

To hold new dreams, new life 

Hide the crown of my Wife 

 

Feet solid towers, stronger than steel 

Crystalized slippers, there id kneel 

Ask for your hand once again  

But in flesh, no more pretend 

 

Heart full of Pearls, tightened clam 

An Oceanic route to your hidden treasure 

My boat is hurt emptied by rushing slams 

Please fill it of love, a drop, cherished forever

Reviews

[A.L.]

You make her seem so strong and independent, yet so incredibly delicate. Your words make her seem like a fantasy.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

It seems I am in love with a ghost

[A.L.]

Maybe you are. But at least ghosts never die.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"Hands hold healings, fingers of needles
Sowing my wounds into pockets
To hold new dreams, new life
Hide the crown of my Wife"

I'm speechless at your beautiful words here..

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Once again, she has romanced my heart

[Dr. YumnaKay]

She? Lol okay 😛😛

[Papaya]

really great romantic write Drift.
your heart shines here.
nice work

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

This was a very long time ago Papaya. That man has changed slowly

[Papaya]

that is the way it goes ...