1. A Rainbow In Your Eyes

Another for the Spiritual Wife collection.

What is a rainbow in your eyes? 

My Dreams run, jump and fly 

Your mind is of not seen 

For you’re the one we should redeem 

 

The clouds exalt your name so high 

My soul revives while my nature dies 

I try to not be felt in shame 

For all I want is my new name 

 

Your soul is pure of no regard 

This path is narrow, this world is hard 

My love is sacred to only you 

Too bad this world can’t see you are true 

 

You cause the angels in Heaven sung… 

But my soul to you can only belong 

My mind is captive inside your heart  

There is nothing in hell that could tear us apart 

 

Your love for me is not of known 

For you’re the one who sits on the throne 

My flesh is buried, my words of stone 

For in the end we are nothing but bone 

 

Our sand cries out for a drop of blood 

But with each tear I turn to mud 

What do you see beyond these eyes? 

For all my spirit wants is be free and fly! 

 

How hard it mumbles, how loud it cries 

My tears drop down to show I try 

Your heaven is sacred, your light I find 

And all these thoughts will evolve my mind

Reviews

[.........]

Very tender. I love the first line. You aren't so bad yourself, you know ;-) One piece of advice: If you align your poems and then indent them over to center instead of just centering, it will be more visually pleasing and satisfying to read. If you center it, then the lines start at different spots. You have some nice imagery here.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Thank you very much, these are old poems I decided to post here, as it was supposed to be my first poetry book. And yet there is one chapter "poem" I have still to write to conclude it all

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"You cause the angels in Heaven sung…
But my soul to you can only belong
My mind is captive inside your heart
There is nothing in hell that could tear us apart"

Sometimes we feel that nothing can turn the way except for how we want it to be but it really doesn't work that way. We don't know what hit us until it does...

[Papaya]

Drift, your words bleed love and hurt so beautifully.
I hope for you one day they bleed love and joy for you do have a very kind heart. Beautiful poem.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Papaya, I dont care what others say, youve been here since day 1. And I am very greatful, that is why you have a special place in my journal heart

[Papaya]

You're welcome. It's great to read you.
I enjoy your childrens poetry so much and your other poems are equally good, you are very versatile.

[A.L.]

You seem to be in so much pain as you ache for her. Yet you want to and you want her regardless. How much will you endure for her? Doesn't your heart cry out to be free?

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

This was the beginning of my new journey... from there it all changed.

[A.L.]

I'm learning that, as I read along. I'm sorry for your pain. She is cruel indeed.