To Anonymous

For someone special

So much to say, yet such little ink

As my words in your mind will deeply sink

Whilst the blooming fist rolls out its fingers

To reach my face on which it lingers

See, smiles cross oceans and bury deep

As clouds rain down, in roots they seep

But in thus tree find quilt of fruit

And shovel the air to carve a route

And as she sleeps in restless waves

A princess heart she truly saves

With Crystal lips that shine off bright

They break through Dusk to shine tonight

If only those eyes grow ocean wide

And flutter the mountain in which they hide

Id say with words from pores of truth

I've never loved so strong in youth

And oh my dreamer don't fall too far

For in the rainbow ill leave a scar 

Of revolting battles against the wind

As fossil stories of times within

Do arc the bow and shoot ahead

The arrow of romance, with love is fed

I wish to find just one last time

The perfect love and its measured rhyme

A jocund heart dormant and sublime... to anonymous.

Author's Note

Enjoy

Reviews

[V]

Very romantic write. I like how you played with the font although I'm usually not much into that but in this case it had a nice effect. Your word choice fulfills the expectation of a love write; dreamy, romantic, flowery, including a lot of nature and analogies according to that topic. The speech of a modern Shakespearean; soft and flowing into its own sweet abyss.
The word anonymous provided a tad of a sharper and more contemporary tone which makes it a rather unexpectedly good closing line.

Nice write. And nice to meet you again.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Thank you very much for being able to captivate every little detail of this art. I appreciate when a reader tales their time in a writing. I truly wanted to create something that could have not just words, not just feeling, but connection and visualization. I'm not a fan of colors either but this one really asked for it.

[V]

That's good to know and you're welcome. I write for/to realize similar things.

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle, beautiful and wonderful words shared my friend. I had to read again. Thank you for sharing the amazing chapter.
Coyote

[AcasualPawn]

Great art there, with your fading ink,
You stroked it until your heart & it sync.................

[An owl on the moon]

Achingly beautiful, and even with colors fading and the letters growing faint there is an urgency and desire to find the way home to this place of wonder and love.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Mr Owl, a pleasure. Thank you for stopping by. I will visit some more

[M]

This piece is utterly beautiful in every way that you wrote it. It reminds me of a sonnet your writing to the person you love. Its one of those poems you wish you could receive in a love letter. It made me yearn for the times when people expressed their love using a pen and paper and didn't simply text their emotions. You did a great job in provoking these emotions.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Ah, it seems you have been traveling deep into my writing, getting a little warm to the romantic writings of mine, not too often do they appear. But this one does hold a special place in my heart. Thank you

[Zoya]

I am glad I came across this piece...this is so, so beautiful! Really loved the way you've shown the slowly fading ink. Great creativity there! And a great write as well!

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

I feel this is more of an art work than a writing. Thank you for stopping by, I shall return the favor to you :)

[Relic]

It's a shame poems of this caliber and quality are not recognized as much as some pretty girl's poem is.

Stunning indeed.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

I thank you so much for your time and words

[A.L.]

There's beauty in good things slowly fading away just like this poem. It's bittersweet but it leaves before it outstays its welcome.

Lovely piece

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Yes, things do fade at times, and yet... appearance swirls in the end

[Muse]

I rarely comment any more. But by chance I stumbled up this piece of art. Simply stunning....100/100

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Its such an honor to pull you in for just a second and be blessed by your words

[Writing Angel]

wow.. I love the imagery with the words getting lighter I loved the flow and I am astonished at the perfect message great work...

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Im glad you stumbled into this one, I would of been sad if you didn't read it

[Writing Angel]

may I ask why?