To All Alone

There are things happening at this time that just seem to make no sense, but there is something greater and I know.

There are things in life that have no time

Like time itself, the day and night

The special moments we hold till then

The Frozen pictures we thaw again

There are things in life that have no time

The thrown in words without a rhyme

But its fine you see, there is just you and I

And when you don't look, at times I cry

There are things in life that have no time

The stairs of glass I repeatedly climb

The pages you read I already wrote

I refuse to let go as there docks the boat

There are things in life that have no time

You must be sad inside the body of that mime

I wish you'd speak, I wish you'd laugh

But now I see where leads this path

There might be things that have no time

But I'm glad to have lived within yours and mine

I know you will be fine...

Author's Note

Dedicated to someone special

Reviews

[lua]

i really admire the perspective of the poem, it repeats this idea of things that are endless and infinite, and the more this is repeated the finite boundary of human life is emphasised and heightens the importance of how that time is utilised
there is an added perspective of the reader being on the outside the narrator's life looking in, we perceive this poem as sad and sorrowful however ultimately, the narrator feels to have spent their time in the right places with the right people and does not look back with regret or sorrow, but peace with what was and what is

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Yes indeed, though hints of sorrow, it is ultimately a look at completion and onward moving towards new things. Things in the past shall remain, but the most exciting are things to come. So we continue with or without those things behind us and simply reflect. Thank you for reading

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"The pages you read I already wrote"

This is sad indeed. I feel there is a specific time for time to work the right way but we want everything too soon, not waiting for the right time to come...
I know you will be fine too...
Well penned emotions..

[Papaya]

This is such a gorgeous poem Drift. Well done.
One of your best I'd say.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Oh you honor me my dear Papaya, you always know just what to say.

[A.L.]

It flows easily and tells a sorrowful story with a beautiful perspective at the end. Great read!

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Yes, it is rather sorrowful

[A.L.]

It's all about what you choose to focus on J.

[Zenovia]

There are things in life that have no time
The stairs of glass I repeatedly climb
The pages you read I already wrote
I refuse to let go as there docks the boat


It's quiet a moving creation...
Sadly beautiful !

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Thank you very much Dear, Ive been coming through hard times. Only the few care.

[Zenovia]

Hope you feel all better ... soon
Hugs

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Thank you dear, I will embrace that hug closely :)