7. Reverie II (English)

For a translation to English

Kissing petals from the rose I planted

I swallow a cloud to conceal my dreams

inside, fireworks when I see you

Stars take the place of tears in my eyes

I sink in a mirror, trapped with just your reflection

Oh, beautiful ghost who's name I know not

My spirit rejoices, smiling at an empty crown

A ring painted, bronze, silver, and gold

I find myself on my knees at dark

Sailing through a realm of beauty and light

I felt you in the wind tickling my face

and the rush of waves hugging me tight

I noticed in the flames a body revealed

Ashes that leave behind a trace

The Snow are words I cannot decode

Falling from heavens rivers to pour on me

In my hand I hold a spirit, a light

The one reason of my fight

It's yours and I keep it as your life

For you are, yes you, My Spiritual Wife

Author's Note

English Version

Reviews

[Papaya]

Thank you for the English version, I read the Spanish one but did not understand it. This is lovely.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Thank you so much! I thought there were more Spanish speakers here lol

[Papaya]

You're welcome. :)

[Tony Jordan]

The sentiments are beautiful Drift.
I read the Spanish version when you first posted and even though I don't know any Spanish - I'm au fait enough with the way the Spanish speak to be able to read it phonetically and I thought it was breath-takingly eloquent.
The English doesn't have the same effect but I'm going to score you on both.
Well done my friend :)

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Yeah, for some reason I think the Spanish version has a beautiful feel to it

[Jes' Pi]

太好了！(beautiful!)
It's pretty hard to transform a poem's/story's language, because usually it doesn't have the same beauty.
But I like it.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Thank you, I gave it a shot

[A.L.]

Más romántico en español pero sigue siendo una buena lectura.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Y mas romantic tu cuando me hablas asi

[A.L.]

Entonces me aseguraré de hablar más a menudo como esto...