New Stories about to Errupt

To those who read and those who will, In the following are teasers for new stories I am slowly progressing through.

Just so you get a taste of what is to come. Please let me know which one sounds more interesting and if any ideas spring to your mind. It would be of great help

1. Balloon Garden:

The daughter of a famous scientist whom claims to be making a new kind of balloon has disappeared from one day to another. In a letter he claims to have made the new balloon and is waiting for his daughter high above the grounds. The daughter in search of her father goes into his office searching for his theories of anything he did, there she finds a red journal. This red journal had all the scientific research of this new balloon her father had discovered. And the primary material was from the Rubber Tree (Hevea Brasilienses), she has re tested his theories and experiments one by one in search of the answers to the new balloon, until in one passage she reads of a close scientist to her father. In the search of this lady, the little girl finds out that the female scientist is her mother. When the two encountered, word spread to a jealous ex-coworker who was always envious of her father's work, he would then pursue the two. It wasn't until they went back to an old house of her fathers that they discovered The Balloon Garden as they fell through a sand pit. But the research was unfinished and there the 2 discovered the answer to the new balloon and produced the famous Balloon Fruit, enabling them to have a moment of flight.

There is a lot of scientific facts in this story, I will use items as Oxygen, Helium, Homeostasis, The Circulatory System, Frozen Soil Theory, Heve Brasilienses, Latex Extraction, and many others. If any one is an expert in this area, their help will be very well needed, remember this is for children and I am trying to teach through literature about science and other subjects.

2. Sunday Voyage:

A story which surrounds itself of famous pirates, here we see Arcadia Jones and her pet detective Monsieur D. Whiskers on a new journey. This story is surrounded of the idea of ghost ships, lost islands, and cursed jewels. The story follows a famous Fictional Pirate named Jøl Blue Fox Williams who was part of a very large crew named the Red Waves, ever since his disappearance, his wife Victoria Monoday Williams has searched endlessly for his existance. Arcadia finds herself in a tropical Island but on a Sunday she noticed no one was out, the dancing, joyful people were all hidden in their houses. She goes off to the shore and sees a mist in the distance to witness what looked like a ship vessel and a tune that follow (Gloomy Sunday, "warning, it is a cursed song that has influenced suicide all over the world"). When she takes out her monocular, the vessel had dissapeared, later she was told of a very terrifying story of a ghost captain who was searching for her husband, she makes a deal with the pirate lady to find her husband before the next Sunday or she would be cursed to travel the endless seas for the rest of her life. They visit Islands that have been known to the world as lost, fiction and even haunted, Isalnds as Hy-Brasil, Antillia, Shi Cheng, Atlantis, Vadhoo Maldives, Kane and Tuanaki. Other things that will be featured in the story are ghost ships as The Young Teazer, Octavius, Lady Loribond, Mary Celestes, Ourang Medan and the notorious Flying Dutchman.  Cursed Items carried in the ship by Victoria Monoday Williams; Maori Warrior Mask, Basano Vase, The Crying Boy Painting, Hope Diamond, Lydian Hoard, Priams Treasure, and the famous cursed song Gloomy Sunday

For those who know alot about pirates your will is highly greatful, this is for kids to learn about strange pirate events and relations to it. To question the existance of these islands and ships.

3. Slaved Shadow:

This is of a boy who lives in an apocalyptic era where nothing but shadows and light rule the world. He is the last human "known of" to have survived the shadow and light war with humans. His shadow is a little female girl shape who has grown with him. The female shadow and he fall in love, as they are in their teenage years and have decided to coexist with each other, little does she know is that there is a demon who lurks in the shadow real trapping all humans. The boy learns of the war and the incident of how shadows claimed humans, enslaving them to others after the war, and how his mother is still out there fighting for his safety, light does not intervene in any way with the old world, as they are waiting for it to be destroyed by shadow. The little girl is then possessed at night by the evil spirit known as Succubus, who is a female sex demon. Her goal is to take the boys body into the shadow world, until an Eclipse occurs and the little girls shadow is free to roam around, thus being able to feel and touch her beloved. But with that same privilege all the other shadows and demons too have the freedom to roam trying to finally take the life of the last human boy. The little girl wants to be freed from the shadow realm to be human once again and live with the boy.

I have ideas for how the little girl becomes human, but I cant spill those beans as it would be too much exposure and spoilage to the story. For all you dark lovers, this is the perfect story to give me ideas of any thing having to do with shadows, demons, manipulation, and anything else. Just remember it is for older kids, probably early teens.

These are the projects I am currently working on, I will be posting by summer as I refine them and finish their ideas, if any one has a suggestion of idea please let me know. I am having trouble with some. Thank you all!

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Tsubaki Kuro]

Sorry I haven't read this sooner. Been gone for a long time. I really, really, really love the Slave Shadow concept. You know me, the dark is my home turf. I can see this as a pg-13 story.

[shyla]

I really love Balloon Garden its a great idea go for it :)

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Aw thank you! Im currently working on the other two plus one extra one! I will be focusing alot on Ballon Garden so I am leaving it for the last of my projects!

[Sammie Sanchez]

Yeah, you are doing the balloon garden!!!!!!! Let me know when you post it!!!!

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Will do! How are you? 😊

[Sammie Sanchez]

Not ok but fine, could you review my poem "the rhythm of depression " ?

[Emilia Cole]

I would read all of these but the third really got me I'm big on writing in fantasy

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Im glad you found an interesting one, I guess that is the one we will use

[Emilia Cole]

Cool by me I have an idea to incorporate into it if you cool with that

[HC Abiona]

All of these ideas are amazing. I really like the second one with the pirates. I'm a sucker for a good pirate story. Working on three projects at a time can be difficult tho. Is there a particular reason why you are doing so many at a time or is it just for fun?

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Ive been working on these ideas little by little, but now I am trying to work alot more on them, they keep me entertained. Thank you! If you have any ideas let me know

[Papaya]

Love the first idea, it's great.
They're all good actually. Love the shadow idea. I wrote one along those lines too. Something very mysterious and romantic about shadows.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

you and I have unfinished business. ;)

[Papaya]

Lol! Yes, I guess that's true. :)