Inception of Fount

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In empty space came a light above

a sleeping idea no one knew of

from tact's and tills came out these four

and little by little began to explore

A trickling spark, a humid flame

a feeling of warmth no one could tame

It starts off small to grow insane

sizzle, burn, fire is its name

A cool breeze or rushing heat

its melodies bitter, often sweet

It carries faces on a fleet

the swift winds that often meet

Sway swish, splish splash 

acid rain from all the ash

it cools and chills, swallows in a dash

a tempest of water for waves to crash

Pound hard, stomp loud

strong as rock, shape of a cloud

cling clash, shakes with sound

make way for the quakes and ground

tossed here, tossed there
tossed about every where 
until the world is settled calm
I strive to keep her safe from harm

Author's Note

Quick writes, Thanks my Ivy

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"tossed here, tossed there
tossed about every where
until the world is settled calm
I strive to keep her safe from harm"

I love this stanza. Although it gives me the feeling that you're just waiting for the world to calm down and then would leave her be... I liked the imagery too.
Nicely penned :))

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

This is one of my favorite writings ive worked on thank you for noticing it

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome 😊😊

[Writing Angel]

Wow to mehis is perfect I love the imagery and the feeling behind it all it speaks loud of you Mr. Ego lover

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Why thank you. Yes, not an ego lover 😊

[Writing Angel]

great work

[Saud Maroof]

I read it and i enjoyed it.
half way through this i felt a desire, an urge to read this in a story form. The images you painted were surreal. The words you chose were point-blank perfect. Amazing work

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Many thanks to you friend.

[Saud Maroof]

no problem

[Ruth]

I like your style :) This is elegantly voiced and gave me many thoughts. You have created a world within that speaks volumes, beautiful! :)

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Why, thank you kindly, I appreciate the stop

[Lana Huskins]

Beautifully written! I absolutely enjoyed this. Great job!

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

thank you dear

[Lana Huskins]

No problem!

[QuayvonS]

Wow, such phenomenal imagery within its own simplicity! This is one of my favorites of yours!

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Oh no no, this was just a very quick write. I remain humble towards it. Thank you!

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Love this!
Really great!

The sway swish stanza was super. Great momentum.
May I send you a suggestion?

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I'm going to anyway...

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Haha anything from you Poison!

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I just sent it. Just a suggestion.

[Dina]

Beautiful imagery. I get the feeling this is a double entendre?

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

You caught me. I thought I could keep it concealed but you got it all through.