The Unbelievable

Thoughts of simplicity

Can you take away the literal out of literature? 

To make it a world I would explore into more 

To have the power of all control 

To make the facts into more of a swirl 

I would freeze the sky into a block of ice 

Fill the empty clouds with rice 

Eat away the chocolate fudged floor 

Connect worlds with a simple door 

Cut the water with a knife 

With the wind pick a fight 

Blow the candle of the Sun 

Golf the planets for my fun 

Swallow balloons and fly away 

Skip the hours of my day 

Kiss the lighting striking hard 

Change the numbers of the cards 

Smash the notes off every key 

Collect each rainbow that I see 

Dig a grave for every ghost 

Steal the light off every post 

Comb the Ocean's wild waves 

Recharge the Moon for its glow to save 

Seduce the stars to keep at home 

Turn a flower into stone 

Cover up with a burning fire 

Learn the comedy behind satire 

Plant a penny to grow a Tree 

Remember that 1+1=3 

Literal fact? I've convinced you to read. :)

Author's Note

Thanks for reading

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"Comb the Ocean's wild waves
Recharge the Moon for its glow to save
Seduce the stars to keep at home
Turn a flower into stone"

I feel there is so much more we can do but we don't try... Your philosophical writes do make me think.
Interesting read :)

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

I'm glad you are venturing with me through a journey

[Dr. YumnaKay]

that I am, and glad too :)

[A.L.]

You convince many a things. I definitely did read and I enjoyed it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts my friend.
"Cover up with a burning fire
Learn the comedy behind satire
Plant a penny to grow a Tree
Remember that 1+1=3
Literal fact? I've convinced you to read. :) "
The above lines could stand alone. You were direct and honest in the poetry. Life and words. Just opportunity for the gather and land right. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Oh my dear friend, thank you very much for the continuous words.

[Coyote Poetry]

Always my pleasure and you are welcome.

[QuayvonS]

This is really bringing the nostalgic memory of writing fantasy tales in middle school. It really makes you think if as a writer now have I cut off my creative abilities I once had at a younger, more naive innocent age? Again your mastery of rhyme is impeccable.
Flawless work my friend! :)

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Very fun. :)
You have a very silly imagination.
That's great to see.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

My dear Ivy! Thank you for exploring my silly mind

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It was my pleasure. :)

[Tabby Mac]

I love, love, love this!!!! This piece took my mind for a spin! It's fun, witty, well written, and awesome! It's awesome!! It made me smile to the core! Well done!
Tabby

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Oh, thank you very much Tabby! Its a childish imaginative write.

[Tabby Mac]

We all need to be in touch with our inner child and this piece makes it easy to! Fun!!

[RSB]

Fun piece.
"connect the worlds with a simple door"
That inspires me. Thanks

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Why thank you. Inspiration is everywhere. Thanks for reading

[KTizzle]

I loved this! My favorite part is the first stanza because it really sets the imaginative tone of the piece. You really put the power in imagination here, lol. I feel like this is a good poem that makes me think about fiction and its process of creation. For some reason I thought of Alice in Wonderland when I read this.

awesome write.

Thanks for posting!

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

I think I was on a natural high that day, just thinking like a pure child who would think all these silly things. thanks for the review.

[M. L. F.]

Imagination!! I love this! You took a leap of creativity and caught the winds just right with this one.. Such images and wild imaginations in this work! I love when writers JUMP outside the box! Great job! :)

..Misty

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Thank you very much, I was just wondering in my thoughts one day and decided to write this little thought process, and sorry for the really late reply. Its been a while since ive come in here.

[Antoñyo]

Quite a joy to read with morning coffee. Imaginative and vivid piece. Great job!
Thanks for the 100/100 share!

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Thank you very much kind sir. I am glad you enjoyed my imaginative world. Your positive vibes ripple through my day.