5. Stages

5. Stages

A Chapter by Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

Plant a Seed and you’ll grow a Tree

Nurture a Child and Man will be aged

Place a Star and a Sun it will breed

Crush a Stone and in Diamonds it will change

Womb Emotions and Love will be born

Hold a Wish and Future will be seen

Save a Kiss and Purity it will learn

Treasure a Princess and there evolves a Queen

The Spiritual Wife will no longer be a Dream





© 2017 Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse


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Wonderful use of words and thoughts.
"Plant a Seed and you’ll grow a Tree
Nurture a Child and Man will be aged
Place a Star and a Sun it will breed"
I agree with the above lines and I like them. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


So many things take time and the results vary. But indeed, if gone about the right way, you'll reap the benefits of patience.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

7 Years Ago

This is true. Time does grow much on its own
A.L.

7 Years Ago

Hmm indeed.
so many great lines

Treasure a Princess and there evolves a Queen

i like that one.

beautiful poem




Posted 7 Years Ago


Papaya

7 Years Ago

that seems unfair
Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

7 Years Ago

Exactly, only one becomes Queen
Papaya

7 Years Ago

oh!!! ok, i get it.
"Treasure a Princess and there evolves a Queen"

A remarkable write. The question is are you willing enough to treasure one...
I liked reading this. Beautiful thoughts, which if put into action, would set up a wonderful era of life...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

7 Years Ago

I truly am
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

Cute.......
For someone so young you are really developing your mind and thoughts. Valentine

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

7 Years Ago

Your pleasant comments always light my heart. Its the experiences in life that have aged me. But Im .. read more
amazing concept.....the different elements you have used here are fun to read and they provoke thoughts too... it flows well with very good presentation....nice mixture with nature and human life... you deserve full ratings....

Posted 8 Years Ago


Inject Positivity

8 Years Ago

okay! im interested in reading that one too... let me know when you finish working on it... i would .. read more
Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

8 Years Ago

Will do, I have seen that you are strongly based in Romance and Faith and Spirit as well. I will be .. read more
Inject Positivity

8 Years Ago

well i love reading although im not a good reviewer but i will give my heartfelt opinions to you... .. read more

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Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse
Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

Worcester, MA



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My writing is strongly based on science, culture, myths and fantasy. I do enjoy poem writing but short stories are my passion, I am developing a few novels as well. I am looking for any critique that .. more..

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