And Then I Woke Up

I was busy with the world enjoying the vista around me

And Then I Woke Up

I thought world will stop as my  problems arise

And Then I Woke Up

All claimed to be on my side but only few remained

And Then I Woke Up

I felt scared as people broke my trust

And Then I Woke Up

Then I realized people were scared themselves
And Then I Woke Up

World seemed so beautiful as I close my eyes 

And Then I Woke Up

So I savored the moment in my heart

And Then I Woke Up

Reviews

[rhythm&blues]

Dreaming or awake, it's always good to wake up to reality. Well said.

[Yousuf Rafi]

Thank you so much :) yes, it's important to wake up from time to time :D

[Sami Khalil]

I like the poem and the repetition...Bravo......................

[Yousuf Rafi]

Thank you so much for liking it :) Boosting my spirits :D

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. We should inspire each other...:)..........................

[Yousuf Rafi]

I just joined :) so yes, lets keep in touch :D

[Sami Khalil]

OK.:).........................

[Kevin]

I really enjoyed this poem! Keep it up :D

[Yousuf Rafi]

my first try. Thank you much much for the feedback :D

[Ayesha Khan]

Amazing! :)
Liked it
"I thought world will stop as my problems arise
And Then I Woke Up"
Keep it up.

[Yousuf Rafi]

Thank you so much for the feedback :) made my day :D