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A Story by Rayne
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Dont judge the style of my writing. Just the plot.

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 The music was blaring so loudly I couldn't hear myself think it seemed,I could feel the awkward and my anxieties were creeping in. I shoved through crowds of people, the air conditioner broke and everyone was dripping in sweat. In Texas its always humid on summer nights. I really did enjoy these parties though, everyone came and wanted to have a good time, even though I was never one to smoke, drink, or pop mollys I still had a good time. I would flirt with a few boys, dance, and maybe even make-out with a few, I only ever had sex twice in my life and that's a good thing considering the fact that I'm fifth-teen. 
 I was almost to the door when a slim, tall like me, brunette girl stopped me. She had on a white belly shirt and skinny jeans. It was Lisa Falgon, one of my best friends. 
 "Whats wrong," she sounded concerned. 
 "Nothing, just you know, everybody here is having such a good time and Eric is over there and he keeps giving me looks, like it awkward and stuff." 
  Eric was the second guy I had sex with. He was tall, had a nice built for a seventeen year-old, had dark hair, a pretty smile, and pale. He used me, made me feel special and beautiful, had sex with me and left me. It was my fault, I got used all the time and I let it happen because I was insecure and hated when guys would get mad at me for not performing sexual activities. 
  "Awe, Jillian, I'm sorry but, come on ignore him you and me both get used all the time, well I used to until I met Robby, but that's not the point don't leave were having so much fun!" 
 I rolled my eyes and pushed past her, "Tell Ashley I'm going home." I walked out the front door and sat on the front steps of the house. This party was out in the middle of nowhere and I couldn't call my aunt because she thought I was sleeping over a friends house, not at a party. I checked my phone, some texts and one missed call from my brother, Mike. I decided I would get back to these later and I looked up at the sky, I loved the stars at night, especially in Texas, they went on forever in seemed. I guess I looked upset because some boys I was flirting with earlier looked at me and almost looked like they were going to ask if I was okay, Thank God they didn't. I would feel pathetic explaining everything. 
 I decided I should start walking home, I got off the step and started into the night. By the time I was half way into my walk I regretted ever wanting to walk home, I was hearing all types of weird noises coming from the woods, I started to pray. Even though I was just a little bit wild I've always been religious. I asked for help, forgiveness, I thanked God and Jesus. and I asked for protection. That night, I don't know why but, I asked for adventure, I guess I figured it wouldn't come. As soon as I got done praying I heard it, it was like a growl and a rustle, I started walking faster because I see this all time in the movies, the dumb s****y teenage girl goes into the woods and dies. I pulled out my phone and thought about calling somebody but, my phone died. I felt something behind me and I took off I started running. 
 I felt something grab my arm and pull me, I started to kick and scream, whatever it was that had me was cold and like really freaking me out. I regretted all of this, I started praying, he had a tight grip and his nails were going into my skin, I felt blood coming out of me. I was in tears, thoughts of me dying raced my mind then suddenly I fell, I fell to the ground. The whatever that was was gone, I was confused and when I looked up I saw him. Out of all the people in the world who could come, it was him. My mouth dropped. He was gorgeous even though he had just killed a wild beast. I looked to the ground a black liquid was coming out of the monster that had snatched me, 
 "A thank you would be nice," he said with a smirk. 
 "I'm so confused, whats going on?" 
 "Let me explain on the way to my house." 

© 2013 Rayne


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Rayne
Just rate and give feedback ignore any bad writing, theres going to be a part two, let me know if I should continue it, its my first actual one so be easy. If anyone actually reads my writing lmao.

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