Twilight

Bella's POV of Twilight

Your black eyes were delighting

I was new, it was exciting

You pulled me in your mystery

And taught me a little about your history

You’re pale, with those golden brown eyes

And you chose me, over everyone to my surprise

You showed me to your secret place

And in your stone arms, I felt safe

You held me throughout the night

Us both not knowing about this upcoming fight

Soon he will come, and try to take me away

But as always my hero, you come and save the day

An angel, trying to keep me alive

Throughout the night, you stayed by my side

You said you were dangerous, but you couldn’t see

The only dangerous thing is if you leave

So won’t you please stay in my life?

Stay with me, throughout the Twilight.

 

Author's Note

I wrote this for my Fanfiction but I decided to share it with you(:

Reviews

[A.M. Everlasting]

I love this poem so much! Especially the lines: "You said you were dangerous, but you couldn't see/The only dangerous thing is if you leave" and "Soon he will come, and try to take me away/But as always my hero, you come and save the day". I think this poem is really good, but I have to say that it could be better if you fixed your "flow" a little by shortening certain lines. Reading it to yourself and making sure you don't trip over any spots can help. But it's still grrrreat, as Tony the Tiger would say. :)