Time to fly

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She sits in her room,

Screaming,

"Go away.",

"let me be"

"Leave.. I don't want to go with you."

"Leave.... please... Just leave!!"

She screams,

No one comes to try and see what's wrong with her,

She screams again,

Crying this time,

"Go away please, Just stop"

She cant,

The monster wont go away,

She screams for help but no one can hear her call,

She screams again,

And again,

No one can hear her,

She begins to cry even harder,

She looks around the dark room,

For something sharp,

She runs over to her secret place,

Where she keeps her treasures,

She asks her self "Should I just end it.. Should I",

"no one will help me."

A little voice in head says "Do it! Do it now! end it all right here on the spot! come one fat a*s!"

She trys to block it out,

She cant,

It wont shut up,

"You wont do it. Hahaha p***y. You wont kill yourself. Make the word a better place. Just do it."

She looks around in her bag to find the sharp object,

She cant find it,

She cry's,

As she cry's harder anger is building,

She cant take it anymore,

As she goes to walk away,

The sharp object appears,

The little voice says to her "yes! you found it. Now do what you have to do."

As her anger came at full force,

She put the blade to her skin and cut,

Cut till she turned white,

As she sat there,

In the puddle that surround her,

She wrote,

"This is where my story ends. I never got to finish all that I had left in me but its time for me to fly. Fly as an angle. Im ready to go. Go for good. Good bye oh good bye."

She kept cutting till she turned blue,

As the blue wore on her face,

She began to fade away,

Away from the monster,

And,

Away from all the problems she cause.

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

Oh man! That's pretty extreme for just having a misquito buzzing around one's ear! I mean, I know it can get frustrating and all and that you probably don't get any sleep and the lack of sleep can lead to many other issues...But when you think about it... if you start pouring your blood out... the dang misquito wins anyway!
Best just leave knives for cutting up the idiots that always forget to use blinkers on the highway! :D

A power and bloody piece of prose you got there. Biggest thing I got from this is the need to always remind myself... it's never me...it's always them... Thus... the girl in this poem wasn't the one to cause the problems, it seldomly ever is.

Aaron - Wolfwind

[Ashley Marie Montgomery]

Ig the girl in this was lost and had no where to turn so she gave up on her self which should never ever be an answer because there is always someone to turn to. I don't know. This just kind of came to me. I hope you don't think that this is real or anything but I guess I was just I don't know thinking and this came. But thanks for the review.

[Wolfwind]

You're welcome for the review. =) I was just imagining a scene that was bit more happy. I read alot of poems on this site that are inspired by peoples hard times. I tend to find something positive to leave as a review in hopes it can bring a smile and let anyone involved know, there is always a lighthouse shining somewhere. =) I respect your ink and It's good to just let it flow wherever it needs to.

[Ashley Marie Montgomery]

Well thank you so much. Its truly nice that you do that because I cant speak for other people but knowing that someone has read there work or someone has an interest always makes you feel better and want to keep writing(: