In Our Dreaming

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If storms they raged and they did come,

Our love would stand

till they were done.

If salt should somehow lose its taste,

my heart would still

feel your loves embrace.

If fragrance somehow lost the rose,

the loving heart

it would still grow.

If love were only in our dreams,

then tears as rivers,

they would stream.

The sun would hide behind the clouds,

and thunder it

would ring out loud.

Life would have no sense of meaning

if love were only

in our dreaming.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for the word, love. Love had many meanings. Love will make us dance and cry often. I liked your description. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Aru Bansal]

You're welcome. Thanks for reading. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

My pleasure and you are welcome.

[Ana B.]

I love this poem....such an wonderful description of this special feeling. Excellent work!

[Aru Bansal]

I'm so glad you loved it. Thank You. ^_^

[Confuser]

Aru: What a breathtaking composition! It is so beautiful, I love it and am still awestruck by the perfection of the flow, every word, pure endearing and marvelous. You are so talented! In Our Dreaming is a very good title. Anyone would devour your words, leaving filled with such harmony, and hope for true love...(even if they have it). Poor husband's would be weaked, while the wife's would begin to DREAM for a taste of words this beatiful to touch his lips...What a gorgeous poem, so subtle, calm and rich without wordiness, tender and the imagery, it unreal. I must say, it is more fragrant than any rose. Thank you so very much. Dale

[Aru Bansal]

OMG!! ma'am you have no idea what your review mean to me. No one ever told me that my poems are so beautiful. You just motivated me to such a level. Thank You. Thank you so much. ANDDD You're welcome. Much love.

[Confuser]

You're welcome....(d)