Love once longed for

Love once longed for

A Poem by Aru Bansal

Broken hearted and alone, 

no bright horizons

for you shown.

From dawn to dusk each day had yearned,

a lonely heart

to be confirmed.

Seeking love in all night bars,

brought greater depth

to all those scars.

Looking to those lands out yonder,

those thoughts of love

way out there wandered.

With joy your heart went out there racing,

as love you’d found

yourself now facing.

Hearts are found  together dancing,

on golden beaches

are romancing.

With hearts held close to feel each beat,

and love once longed for

made complete.

© 2015 Aru Bansal


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Very good. The rhyming was great! So is the poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aru Bansal

9 Years Ago

Thank you. Glad you liked it.
Nice writing, keep it up.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aru Bansal

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Very Good I Like it, the rhyme sequence was very good. Looking forward to more :)


Posted 9 Years Ago


Aru Bansal

9 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
Hope you like the rest too.
Wow! That was a wonderful written piece. You encapsuled the journey of finding love quite well!
Thank you for sharing that! Keep Writing!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aru Bansal

9 Years Ago

You are welcome. ^_^
Really great pleasant poem. "With joy your heart went out there racing, as love you’d found
yourself now facing." Made my heart flutter. Great work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aru Bansal

9 Years Ago

Thank You, Julie ^_^
I also thought the flow of this write was so smooth and graceful, great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aru Bansal

9 Years Ago

Thank You, Sir. :)
I'm glad you liked it.
Aru Bansal....I must sigh, what a lovely poem; how beautiful it flowed - peaceful, calm, heartfelt and great rhymes, yearned and confirmed, wander and younder......You must read Ms. Jewel; she has a little of your flavor; this I cannot do, so it makes me love it all the more. Thank you!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aru Bansal

9 Years Ago

Your vocabulary is too high as compared to mine and your writings are quite exceptional. I must say,.. read more
Confuser

9 Years Ago

That's interesting. I am a novice.
Aru Bansal

9 Years Ago

Oh! You don't seem like one. :P

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Added on January 22, 2015
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Aru Bansal
Aru Bansal

Bathinda, India



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Indian. 18 and a poet. My first book- The Love Portions. more..

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