who is waiting for me when i die

a poem i just amde up

WHEN I DIE I WONDER WHO'S REALLY WAITING

I HAD A DEAM LAST NIGHT THAT I HAD A INTERVEIW WITH SATAN

THEN WE GOT TO DEBATING

ABOUT WHO WAS REAL AND WHO WAS FAKING

I TOLD HIM IM ABOUT MONEY NO WAITING

NO HESITATION

JUST PRESENTATION

IMMA SHOW YOU HOW I GET DOWN FOR CURRENCY

WHY YOU THINK IM HERE THE MONEY IS WHAT MURDERED ME

THEN THE FIRE BLASTED

AND HE LAUGHED

 

 

Author's Note

BE HONEST

Reviews

[Gabriella]

This is really good, I can definitely hear it being recited in my head. However, you've made some typos
(there are a lot of missing letters, and I think you mean Satan not Satin) and I think it would be beneficial to you to revise this. Also maybe not type it in all caps because it seems like you're yelling.

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

This is pretty good, I can imagine it being a song... Nice work dude :)

[million jackson]

YEA I JUST MADE IT UP
I DONT CARE ABOUT IT CHECK OUT MY STORIES IM NOT TRYING TO BE A POET FOR REAL FOR REAL BUT I WOULDNT MIND BEING AN AUTHOR