Scattered Thoughts

Scattered Thoughts

A Poem by youngkingkwan
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A free verse of thoughts

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So blind,
I should have fought harder,
The joy of bittersweet, 
Love and let go, 
Open eyed,
Young,
Immature,
Unsure,
Naive,
Help me to grow up,
Grow fonder,
Mind wanders to the thought of you,
A smile,
A look into the past,
It last but a moment,
You own it, 
Just as I do, 
It's inside you, 
Save it as the last memory you have of me,
If we never meet again, 
A friend, 
I could call you at the very least, 
A teacher,
Maybe, 
Time stopped,
I'd jump back, 
Look at us through the window, 
When it was simple, 
Nymphos we were,
But how could I not love you,
Imperfections,
Everything that made you, 
Perfect,

© 2015 youngkingkwan


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blown away, you captured your emotions perfectly!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

youngkingkwan

8 Years Ago

thank you this was a very emotional piece for me to write
amazing! easy to read yet filled with emotion i like your style!

Posted 8 Years Ago


youngkingkwan

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reading :)

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Added on November 27, 2015
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youngkingkwan
youngkingkwan

Brandon, Manitoba, Canada



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I've been writing poetry and lyrics for several years. I'm looking to number one share my thoughts through words with other interested people, and two hopefully get some effective feedback and/or comm.. more..

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