Rain's Renewal

It Only Beats Quicker

A tender heart beats,

Rumble in the thunderclouds, 

How precious the sound, 

Author's Note

Comments / Reviews ?

Reviews

[hanir]

Very precious! Indeed! Nicely written.

[JustinCorrigible]

"Rumble in the thunderclouds" is almost onomatopoetic, I really like that line.

[youngkingkwan]

Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!

[Lasune]

I like how this sounds like a protector overlooking someone they love dearly, very sweet.

[youngkingkwan]

I didn't write it that way but it definitely can work in that view. Thanks for the new perspective on this!