Pain Is My Potential

Pain Is My Potential

A Poem by youngkingkwan
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A bit of a light / dark struggle

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Surrounded by these walls again, trapped here in imprisonment,

I used to let my heart run free but darkness claims the innocent,

Condemned to solidarity, precious time, I’ve given it,

Flooded in a sea of pain, it’s kind of pleasant, isn’t it,


It reminds me of the life I have, it helps me to revive, 

Assist to bear the sadness, a companion of goodbyes, 

Appreciate the sentiment, the smiles, and the cries, 

It truly is a blessing, only time could make me realize,


Affliction is a breath of air, something so essential, 

If you feel abrasion then you also feel the gentle,

Inspire me to be unique, eradicate the stencil, 

Undergo a metamorphosis then reach for my potential,

© 2015 youngkingkwan


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Life itself can be a prison if you choose to look at it that way, and some people confine themselves to living in a fantasy world within their mind. An escape from pain, responsibility or ones own idiosyncrasy that allows one to heal, recover or even grow so like a butterfly emerging from a cocoon. Very in depth thinking from an analytical mind. Bravo!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

youngkingkwan

9 Years Ago

Emotion is my best method of in depth writing. All of these words come from something I've felt one .. read more



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Got a new phrase to live by, 'pain is potential'

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

youngkingkwan

9 Years Ago

One of the most motivating things out there. A drive to not be hurt. Thaank you for reading.
All of your poems are captivating. I can't help but look forward to more.


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youngkingkwan

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much I appreciate your words
Life itself can be a prison if you choose to look at it that way, and some people confine themselves to living in a fantasy world within their mind. An escape from pain, responsibility or ones own idiosyncrasy that allows one to heal, recover or even grow so like a butterfly emerging from a cocoon. Very in depth thinking from an analytical mind. Bravo!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

youngkingkwan

9 Years Ago

Emotion is my best method of in depth writing. All of these words come from something I've felt one .. read more

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Added on July 27, 2015
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Tags: pain, potential, motivation, dark

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youngkingkwan
youngkingkwan

Brandon, Manitoba, Canada



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I've been writing poetry and lyrics for several years. I'm looking to number one share my thoughts through words with other interested people, and two hopefully get some effective feedback and/or comm.. more..

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