Puzzle

Puzzle

A Poem by Duncan Young
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An acrostic defining PUZZLE

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Pieces spread before it starts
Unassembled picture parts
Zooming together for lots of fun
Zings you if you're missing one
Leaves a hole forever more
Except when you find it on the floor

© 2008 Duncan Young


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Or the dog chews it up. I'm enjoying your writing. Fun and imaginative. Good write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Excellent form. Fun read. Love how you ended it!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I love this! Very creative using the word "puzzle" to make a poem, and good job with the Zs xD That would have taken me forever~ But you made it sound so natural & I didn't even notice the title thing until after I'd read through it. I also liked the rhyme - very fun poem overall, good job!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on March 30, 2008

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Duncan Young
Duncan Young

Lansing, MI



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After years of writing acrostics as a hobby, I accumulated over 400 of them. I finally decided to publish two e-books. They are available on www.lulu.com/youngduncan There is also a FREE sampler t.. more..

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