Grizzly Manor: SixA Story by youlovelucieA modern take on Wuthering Heights taking place outside of New Orleans.How
I left Bayou Lafourche without getting a ticket for reckless driving, I’ll
never know. What I did get before I left
was a tank of gas. If I had my way, I
would have waited until I got to the next town, but the Bayou was far enough
from civilization to make me uncertain of my ability to do this. So, when I saw that Gil’s Bait & Tackle
Shop had a small gas pump in front of it, I pulled into the gravel parking lot,
even though that gas pump looked like it had last served its purpose during the
Johnson administration. I
hadn’t smoked a cigarette since college, but as I stood pumping gas in the
muggy heat after a sleepless night in the White Room, the blue and white pack
of Parliament Lites being advertised in the window had never seemed more
appealing. Reasoning that one cigarette
couldn’t hurt, I made my way inside of Gil’s. It
was a good thing that I hadn’t been seeking a respite from the heat, because
Gil’s couldn’t offer any. An old fan
blew from side to side, rattling the tiniest of breezes. “Good mornin’,” a chipper voice greeted
me. Looking over to the checkout
counter, I realized that my greeting had come from a stocky blonde. She was probably Rose’s age, but looked
younger, fresher, and certainly happier, although that probably wasn’t hard to
be. Her sun-kissed skin and the sprinkle
of freckles across her nose made t clear that she spent a lot of time outdoors
as opposed to Rose’s pallor complexion.
The biggest contrast was probably the fact that this young woman was smiling. “Morning,”
I smiled back at her. “Can
I help you find somethin’?” Scanning
the small shop that was, in fact, mostly full of bait and tackle, I retrieved a
bottle of Coke out of a refrigerated case before plopping it on the
counter. “And a pack of Parliament
Lites, please.” “Yes
ma’am.” My
jaw clenched. First Lance, now this
girl. Just how old did I look,
exactly? While I reminding myself that
it was just good manners here and not indicative of how aged I looked, the girl
reached behind her for a pack of cigarettes and then rang up my purchases on a
register with actual buttons that made a “ding” when she opened the
drawer. I wasn’t fully confident that
Gil’s was equipped for credit card purchases.
“You ain’t from around here,” she noted, placing my Coke and Parliaments
in a plastic bag. She wasn’t asking, she
was fully aware that I did not live here.
Bayou Lafourche wasn’t exactly a booming metropolis. “Nope. Just visiting.” “You
got family in town?” she asked expectantly. I
shook my head. “Just doing some
research.” Laughing,
the girl told me, “Well you might wanna get elsewheres. Ain’t nothin’ worth researchin’ here.” Assuming
she meant other than the murderer who lived probably just two miles away, I was
ready to thank her and then get back to my escape from the Bayou. The girl, however, with her southern manners
and friendliness bred into her, made more polite conversation. “Where you been stayin’, if you ain’t got
family here? I can’t think of anywhere
to stay ‘round here. Closest hotel’s not
until the interstate.” Instead
of correcting her that a Super 8 off I-90 was only arguably a hotel, I
answered, “I was staying at a bed and breakfast. Grizzly Manor.” The
lively color disappeared from the girl’s cheeks, almost as fast as her smile
did. Gulping, she noted, “Well then it’s
probably for the best that you leavin’ town.” It
was only slightly reassuring that even the locals were afraid of what went on
inside Grizzly Manor. I pushed out a
tense smile at the girl before making to take my caffeine and nicotine and get
back on my way. I was nearly out the
door when she spoke up again. “Hey, was
there a girl there? My age, real
pretty. Her name’s Rose.” I
paused. It must have been for only a few
seconds, but it felt like I wrestled with myself in that doorway for
hours. Was I more curious, or more
afraid? Did I care more about that young
woman being manipulated and abused inside that run down bed and breakfast than
I cared about my own safety, and sanity?
Curiosity may have killed the cat, I reasoned, but satisfaction brought
it back. All I needed to know was this
one thing " how Rose had gotten stuck in that situation " and then I’d leave,
satisfied with the answer. Or maybe I
was just kidding myself. It was entirely
possible that the writer in me wouldn’t, and couldn’t, allow a good thickening
plot to go unheard. Finally,
I answered, “There was. Do you know
her?” With
a wistful expression, the girl answered, “Used to. We was friends when we was kids, ‘fore her
daddy died. Then she got married to
Rocco and I haven’t heard hide nor hair from her since.” Even
though I was in an exhaustion-induced semi-haze, the name Rocco stuck out to
me. It wasn’t very common, and I
recalled coming across it in the research I’d done last night before attempting
to flee the Manor. “Rocco…Grizz’s son?”
I asked. “Rose was married to Rocco
Lee?” “Sure
was,” the girl answered. “Mr. LeCompte
wasn’t very happy about it, neither. But
by then he was too sick to be puttin’ up much of a fight.” If
I was the cat in this metaphor, each answer this girl gave me was making my
curiosity stronger and wasn’t satisfying it in the least. Unable to help myself, I asked, “Who is Mr.
LeCompte?” She
opened her mouth to answer, but at that same moment a man walked in wearing
waiters and a white tank top, wiping his hands, filthy and black with oil, on a
rag that didn’t look like it was helping very much. “Lexi,” he interrupted. “You keepin’ this lady from gettin’ on with
her day?” “No,
Daddy,” she insisted. “We was just
chattin’.” Lexi’s
father looked from her, to me, and then back again. “She looks like a busy lady. Best be on her way.” “Yessir,”
Lexi nodded. With that, her dad gave me
one more look that couldn’t have been anything but suspicious, before deciding
that Lexi would obey him and heading out the back door again. A minute later, we heard the sound of a boat
motor starting up and Lexi told me, “Most folks don’t much like talkin’ about
all that.” “All
what?” The
motor stopped running and Lexi shook her head.
“I really shouldn’t say.” Then, a
little louder, probably hoping her father could hear, she bid me, “Have a nice
rest of your day!” and that was that. © 2014 youlovelucieAuthor's Note
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Added on October 21, 2014 Last Updated on October 21, 2014 Tags: fiction, romance, wuthering heights, reboot AuthoryouloveluciePrinceton, NJAboutI'm Lucie, and I'm a total sketchball about showing people my writing for 100% no reason. I've got about 17 different ideas, and then some. more..Writing
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