Mia

Mia

A Poem by potato
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An eating disorder, its a dangerous thing

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Why does everybody hate me?
Oh, but I would never hate you
Why won't anyone love me?
Oh, but Im here to love you
Im just fat and ugly thats all I am.
Oh, but I can change that
How?
You'll see




Im hungry
No your not
Lunch?
Skip that meal
Can I eat this?
Yes, yes you can
I actually feel full
Good, now off to the bathroom




I don't like this anymore
Shhhhhh. It'll make you beautiful
But I can't stop
Good, that means its working
But I want to stop
Don't you want to be beautiful
Yes
Good,this'll make you beautiful.
Beautiful collarbones 
Beautiful waist
Beautiful thigh gap
Beautiful face
I promise



I can't stop
I won't stop
Good
I will be beautiful...



No. You'll be dead my dear

© 2018 potato


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A tragedy that can take over a person's life and.. finish it.

Your poem is near to being a set piece for the stage, shedding colour on what your words mean. But not a single word is make believe, there's no stand-in for your words because they tell all.. in an emotional and adamant way. The added lay-out is unusual but certainly catches the eye. God willing to deter rather than invite.

Posted 10 Months Ago



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Added on January 16, 2018
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Tags: eating disorder, ed, mia, bulimia, dead, death, dark, hope, stop, anarexia, binge, purge

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potato
potato

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I love to write,I always have. Writing has always been my escape to my own little world and out of the terrifying one I was living in. I love to write fiction,but with some true stories of my life and.. more..

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