Starry Midnight

Black.

Darkness envelopes,

The world around us.

While the blind can not see,

The seeing really don't,

Understand the world.

They don't see,

Through the darkness,

The beauty of it all.

I do.

Among this dark midnight,

I see the shinning sparkle,

The lights floating

Through the sky.

I see the stars.

On this starry midnight,

I hope to give you,

Give you the gift of sight.

So,

Go out and see the stars.

Their waiting.....

Reviews

[Zoe Richardson]

What a lovely thought. When in darkness, we only need to look up to see the light!

[wizardlypoet8]

I can feel the darkness you describe, it's thrilling. I love the imagery, very vivid. I am not so good at reviews, but you are certainly good at poetry. Really good I love it!

[silverwritinggoddess]

There is beauty in the night and plenty of magic that comes with it. It's so beautiful with the stars painting the black canvas with the moonlight shining down on us. You can't deny it! Great write!

[TheBubbleManiac]

A beautiful piece. This just shows how wonderful the darkness can be. Some people don't know the true beauty the night brings. With those shimmering stars of wishes. Great job!

[Nadia_2]

I am also a night lover this poem perfectly depicts that! Well done.

[potato]

Why thanks for reading. Glad you liked it

[kcalel825]

i wonder if you were sad when you wrote this, i see the pain in the beauty of this poem and its painfully beautiful

[potato]

Thank you. I believe that most of my writing comes from that sad place within..

[kcalel825]

sometimes sadness is not always as sad as we think, sadness sometimes brings the happiest things out of all of us...i love this poem

[Alucard6336]

Sometimes the stars aren't in the sky.

Anywho, I enjoyed it. I am not blind, for I can see you have much talent. This was very enjoyable, and i really enjoyed it's layout and rhythm. Awesome job friend :)

[potato]

Why thank you lots. i really don't know what part of me this came from, Its not usually the type I write. It kind of just...Poof! And came to me. I wrote it down in a hurry on a napkin in the Caf at school.

[Alucard6336]

I write everything on my phone. I'm sure with your talent you will go far in life. Remember, dream endlessly, and you are bound to make one of those wishes come true. Just consider the star ocean above us a pool of endless wishes, and your mind the tool needed to harvest them. Never give up on your dreams.