Opposites

This life

Hopeful and grand

Brought many memories

Falling,falling down the rabbits hole

Out of this life and in

To another

This death.

Reviews

[Mary]

I like this poem lots! I can only hope to be able to have my wonderful memories accompany me through the death journey, which, when finally done, will no longer be needed.

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

Itried to read it forward and backward to see if it made sense both ways. Sadly it did not, however, I love the idea that memories take you far from reality. It´s also sad we can´t eve revisit them unless in our daydreams. Liking it!

[ANTO]

I like the shape of this and the fact that you have Life referenced at the top then Death referenced at the bottom and these two 'worlds' are hinged along the axis of the line "Falling...rabbits hole", suggesting the rabbits hole as the portal from the living to the dead. Is reincarnation a theme here - I got that from this. Theres more to this than meets the eye I feel and its uber clever or just a coincidence - I bet its uber clever.

[potato]

Thank you. It could be either way, depending on the mind that reads it.

[Eagergreen]

An intresting format with an even more curious name due to the compliments of course your poem was very nice I enjoyed taking the time to read it when a poem makes me want to read it twice I enjoy life so much better and that what yours did

[potato]

Oh, why thank you very much.